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作文求拍。。谢谢了。。准备的第一篇作文

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楼主
发表于 2008-3-4 14:56:00 | 只看该作者

作文求拍。。谢谢了。。准备的第一篇作文

因为是写的第一篇作文,很生疏,又限了时间,有点小紧张,发上来,请各位强悍的cder拍拍,谢谢大家了!

What is the most important consideration in relationships? Different people would have different answer. My answer will be honest. As we know, It will never be too more to emphasize this virtue. In the following aspect of this article, I will explain why I give this answer.

Firstly, honest is the basis of any relationship. If we cannot keep honest when dealing with other person, or we cannot get honest response from others, there is no necessary to keep the relationship anymore. Taking imaging that if your lover lies to you, no matter what the reason is, what you felling will be? Will you feel exciting, sorrow or even you can just let it be?

Secondly, honest is just a responsibility that we should take. We all had been taught from very young age on that we should tell the truth and be honest in any circumstance. While, as we growing up, the virtue has be lost. We wouldn’t keep honest for many reasons, such as we don’t want to hurt others, and we even create the phrase “white lie” to dispute for our so called “virtue”. All of them are excuses in fact. We lie just because we dare to face the consequence and be afraid to be punished, although we know as well that it is what we have to confront.

Last but not the least, it will be embarrassed to be caught to lie, and we cannot control over the consequence at all. When the students in lower grade come to ask you some questions about the study or life, you cannot give him the suggestion as you have not such experience. While shaming to be laughed at, you choose to lie to him. At present, it seems just ok, nobody would find out. But, I am afraid after many years later, it would be a burden to you as your wrong suggestion would have such bad effort for him.

All in all, honest will be important consideration in any relationship. I will always tell the truth, and want my friends can telling me truth as well.


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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2008-3-4 20:11:00 | 只看该作者

 

zijiding....
板凳
发表于 2008-3-5 02:28:00 | 只看该作者
I am practising TOEFL writing as well. Did some modification on this essay.
Learn from each other.
Practice makes perfect.



What is the most important consideration in a relationship? Different people would have different opinoins.
    
As for me, the best answer is to be honest. As we know, It will never be too
    
much to emphasize this virtue. In the following aspects of this article, I will explain why I give this answer.

Firstly,
honest is the basis in any relationship. If we cannot keep honest when
dealing with other person, or we cannot get honest response from
others, it is not necessary
    
to keep the relationship anymore. Taking imaging that if your lover lies to you, no matter what kind of reasons,
    
what your felling will be? Will you feel exciting, sorrow or even you can just let it be?

Secondly, honest is just a responsibility that we should take.( the statement is not clear) We all have been educated since very young age that (had been taught from very young age on )that we should tell the truth and be honest
        in any situations
    
(or at any circumstances). While, as we are
    
growing
up, the virtue has been lost. We wouldn’t keep honest for many reasons,
such as we don’t want to hurt others, and we even create the phrase
“white lie” to dispute for our so called “virtue”. However, all
of them are excuses in fact. We lie just because we dare to face the
consequence and are afraid to be punished, although we know as well
that it is what we have to confront.

Last but not the least, It is nice to be honest because it will be embarrassing if somebody is caught to lie, (it will be embarrassed to be caught to lie,) and he or she cannot control over the consequence at all. For instance, when a student
(students) in lower grade comes to ask you some questions about the
study or life, you cannot give him the suggestion because you do not
have such experience. While shaming to be laughed at, you choose to lie
to him. For short period of time,
    
(At
present,) it seems just ok, nobody would find out. But, I am afraid
that after many years, (later, repeted) it would be a burden to you as your wrong
suggestion might have some bad effects on him.
    


All in all, honest is an important consideration in any relationship. I will always tell the truth, and want my friends to do same thing to me
    
(can telling me truth) as well.
[此贴子已经被作者于2008-3-5 2:31:58编辑过]
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2008-3-5 20:36:00 | 只看该作者

many thanks!

one of my friends, have a good command of english, also help me revise my wrinting. enjoy it.

What, you may wonder, is the consideration of the most importance in a certain relationship? Different people may hold various viewpoints toward this question, while my answer will absolutely be the honesty.

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