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Recently, a hot debate rises over whether young people should have the ability to organize and plan. When it comes to this complex issue, different people hold different opinions due to their distinct backgrounds and experiences. Some people advocated enthusiastically that teenagers should have such abilities, whereas others are skeptical about it. As far as I concern, in general, it is essential for youngsters to arrange themselves independently.

     Admittedly, several years ago, such abilities is not so important that almost multitude of adolescent ignore these in their daily life, for lives in the past was quiet simple, compared to modern time. The young can readily do their routine step by step, regardless of  the surroundings. For example, one college students only have one thing to focus, which is study, neglecting the activities, relationships, accommodations; etc .He can live a rather easy and convenient life.

However, things have changed dramatically these years. Hardly can one person be successful in his life if he does not make a plan for himself in the future. Our daily lives become more and more complex as time goes by. Technology, science, even your parent change in every second. As we know ,since we are all common person, we can not foreshadow what will happen in next second, especially we, youngsters, who lack of experiences. Therefore it is crucial to arrange our life in next days, next weeks or even for you future career. Somebody, who are suspicious about this, will encounter barriers in his life, just like a car clogged in a traffic jam.

Moreover, making plan for is not only getting yourself ready for your future, but also it is a critical characteristic for everybody. In my view , organization eclipse all other elements in importance in one's life. For instance,. a successful managers, such as Zhao Xiaorui ( chief executive officer of Haier ) , makes a schedule himself for each day in a week. George Washington, in his early childhood, had made a life goal in his future. Not much to our surprise, they were highly honored and revered. Apparently, organization and plan have a profound influence on one’s life. Thus our teenagers should make a plan for themselves more or less.

     To sum it up ,for what have been discussed above, considering the merits that making a plan ,we can reach a conclusion that we, especially our adolescents, should be organized and prudent for our future, as long as we do not want to lag behind the step of our society.

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