[求助]请zdlukeluck看看我的这个结尾给批改一下

Some people like to do only what they already do well.other people prefer to try new things and take risks . which do you prefer ?支持RISK

Some people like to do only what they already do well.other people prefer to try new things and take risks . which do you prefer ?支持RISK

As Confucius, the foremost philosopher saying” life is trip on the sea, everyone can choose to travel in ideal weather but taking a long time or travel in a extremely bad weather in a short time.” I am sure that few people are prepared to sacrifice holiday time for safety of travelling in a good weather. Consequently please try some things and take risks.  

 life is trip on the sea, everyone can choose to travel in ideal weather but taking a long time or travel in a extremely bad weather in a short time.

这个表达不是很地道，而且比较缺乏逻辑：一般而言，应该是天气好，船才快呀！

让我思考一下怎么改比较好