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Meaning Analysis :
1. Although Bug differs on something, the bug share many similarities.
2. Differences - Varying body lengths and Range of shape and colors
3. Similarities - External and Internal Structure.
Errors :
Although X ,Y : in these kind of structure, X and Y should be logically related and grammatically parallel.
We cannot talk about two different things in this structure,
Say "Although India is biggest democracy, Mars is red planet"
Non Underlined Part "the majority .... Structure" is a Clause, so Underlined part should be Clause to make it Parallel.
"Although Varying in body lengths and with a range " is not clause. "Varying in" is also not able to modify present variation in body length.
POE
A) Although varying in body lengths of just under 1 millimeter to over 110 millimeters, and with
Incorrect - Errors explained above.
B) Although their body length varies from just under 1 millimeter to over 110 millimeters, as well as displaying
"their body ... 110mm" is clause , but the phrase "as well as ... colors" is just dangling. it should ideally connect to subject of clause, but in reality it is just dangling without any purpose.
Of course "their" is possessive pronoun and does not have any possessive antecedent.
C) Although bugs vary in body length from just under 1 millimeter to over 110 millimeters and display
Bugs Vary and display -- Correct SV pair.
Although X, Y both X and Y are clauses so parellel
It is correct
D) Whereas bugs have varying body lengths, of just under 1 millimeter to over 110 millimeters, and with
whereas bugs have ..110 mm and with - And with does not have any purpose in this. It is extra and dangling
E) Whereas their body lengths vary from just under 1 millimeter to over 110 millimeters and with
With error same as option D,
Their - error as in Option B |
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