yes, topic 166, it is popular, recently.
When I wrote my essay, I found myself strongly support the option of turning into 18 years old, and maybe because there was no enough time left, I somewhat neglected the discussion of other events. Moreover, I failed to give examples. I hope other XDJMs would not make the same mistakes.
My suggestion:
For the point of "turning into 18 years old"
1. It is defined by Civil Law in China, and thus make people become adults legally and automatically.
2. Be physically,intellectually, emotionally mature and capable of living along.
3. "Dance" with other events and enhance our points by comprison and examples. (This was what I have no time to do. )
4.The rest of the essay? We can just follow the models.
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