请nn指点一下:AI149

虽然之前看了很多模板，但这篇还是处女作，nn不要笑我。准备虚心听取大家意见。bowing

“In today’s rapidly and unpredictably changing world, attempting to learn from the past is no longer the wisest strategy.”

Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your position with reasons and/or examples from your experience, observations, or reading.

The speaker asserts that attempting to learn from the past is no longer the wisest strategy in today's world that is changing rapidly and unpredictably. While today's world is not as constant as it used be, in my view, to learn from the history is still the best way to study today's society.

In the first place, the speaker's assert that study history is no longer the wisest strategy is based upon an assumption that as the world change rapidly and unpredictably, the human being, who consist of the world, also change the nature of their reaction. This assumption ignores our every day common sense. Although the improvement in both asset and spirit is tremendous, the human nature is unchanged. Maybe the most obvious evidence is that people still believe that obscenity is harmful to a society and should be prevented in broadcast media, just as what people believed one hundred years ago.

In the second place, the history is the only reliable resource to us to research human action. The reason why the speaker's assert that attempting to learn from the past is no longer the wisest strategy is unacceptable is that without researching past, any predict of future is ungrounded. Only history can provide a convinced and scientific direction that figure out what people will react when face future affairs.

Admittedly, some people may point out that lots of factors influence people's reaction and viewpoint and some of them do not exist today. Even so, the fundamental of human intrinsic, which mainly decided people reaction, will never change, and the history is still available in today's world.

In sum, the speaker's assert that in today's rapidly and unpredictably changing world, attempting to learn from the past is no longer the wisest strategy ignores both the fact that human nature is unchangeable and the reality that the history is the only reliable resource to predict future. History study is still available, even in light of today's changing world.

如果这是第一篇，那么兄的写作水平不错了! 魔板的痕迹很少...

就是字数稍显少了些，而且第一个理由看上去太像AA, 自己的观点反而不明显. 不过基本框架也出来了.

谢谢rhod的指点，我还以为没人肯帮我看看呢。我的字数总是提高不上去，而且写AI的时候几乎没有什么像样的例证。这些会不会成为硬伤？

rhod觉得我的写作水平还过得去，可能部分原因是我特意背过几篇范文吧。

社会在变,我们对未来把握不定.

历史在重复自己,人的生存需要,情感需要一直是主线.

研究历史,知道我们并不异于前人,尽管技术进步;可以为未来指明方向.

这样是不是更扣紧题目?也便于展开?