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[语文] Issue61,求拍

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发表于 2012-1-25 00:18:45 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
小的第一次写ISSue,这样还有戏不?
题目:People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
It is widely believed that people should fully consider all the possible consequences before doing anything. However, whether one should do that or not depends on the work he or she does. Taking risks may be a good way for a challenger like Bill Gates who stopped his college study but a bad way for someone who studies some dangerous scientific research like bombs.
Undertaking risky action after fully consideration may help people to do things more precisely and avoid possible dangerous conditions. With the development of modern technology, many scientists have devoted their lives to the study of bombs and other dangerous research. Everything they do should go through fully examination and thousand times of experiment. By considering the consequences that may occur, people can go through the whole experiment once again and may find new problems or new founds.
On the other hand, fully consideration may cause a bunch of bad effects. First, timid personality may be formed. In some extent, everything we do might take risks. If we considered everything too carefully, we may form a timid personality and would not dare to do anything at last. Second, just like a movie had said, "Life is a box of chocolate, you never know what you are going to get." We came to this world to face challenge, sometimes we have to take risks to fulfill our dreams. Taking Bill Gates as an example, he quitted the college and decided to launch his own company. If he had a second thought and take everything into consideration, we might not be able to use the Microsoft today.
There are so many chances for us to undertake risky actions in our whole life. If it is really a dangerous situation, carefully consideration of its consequences should be made. But be brave to challenge your life and take another way may help you to find another yourself. So it is important for us to consider our own situations before we take risks.
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沙发
发表于 2012-1-25 03:51:48 | 只看该作者
发到作文专区啊,现在拍作文都在那里了。
板凳
发表于 2012-1-25 17:57:38 | 只看该作者
1. It is a little short (but for starters that is okay)
2. Try to remember to leave a space below each paragraph
3. who studies (NO some) dangerous scientific
4. risky action after fully (full) consideration
5. find new problems or new founds (ideas or inspirations).

keep it up
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