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People attend college or university for many reason,(For example ^^).Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

   
                College is a place where people can receive an advanced education, people attend college for many reasons, for example, some people want to get a further study in specific college, some want to change their ambience of studying, or some want to get a better job in the future, whatever reasons people attending college for, as for me, attending college is just a preparation for future life.

    First of all, as attending college is a target of studying in high school, it seemed more people who attending college are for advanced education, because there are many teachers and professors who have a lot of experience in teaching their students with common skills and professional knowledge, which are very useful in their fields. So, it is obvious that a higher level of study make a great contribution to their future when they have to face the job hunting.

    Second, studying in college is also good for improve people's basic living skills, for example time arrangement, cooking etc.. Actually most of our spare time is arranged by our parents or teacher when we were in high school. They regulated your time telling you when to get up, when to have lunch or dinner, when to finish your homework, or even when you do sport, thus, you may easily form the habit to follow the others-arranged schedule and lack the ability of timing. To solve this problem, (studying in college) can be a wise choice, because this situation ( force you to do) everything by yourself but your parents, if you do not want your life become awful, you do need to learn how to make arrange your time.

   The last but not the least, there is an obvious advantage of attending in a college, you can meet more people, and I mean you can make more friends. One enter a strange place has to meet many new things, to obey new rules, to talk with strangers, that are all a precious experience, which is the most distinctive, associating new friends and learning how to co-operate in a new environment.

   To sum up, people who attending in college is make a preparation for life, everyone have this desire to be successful and have a good future. Since society is a congregate of individuals, the more advanced education people can received, the more strong the country.

黄的地方是自己改过的，word里面贴过来不知道怎么消了

另外我觉得最严重的地方就是没有实际的example。。。各位怎么看？