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众志成城,请帮我改作文

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发表于 2008-6-18 13:33:00 | 只看该作者

众志成城,请帮我改作文

22号考了,想到四分,现在还差多远啊

Currently, as the vehicle greatly facilitates people's  life with providing us a easy way of transportation, on the contrary, it indeed causes serious problem, and keep troubling us every now and then: the exhaust gas and continuous noise result in the severe contamination problem; the traffic jam are attributed to the sharply increasing cars. What a bad headache!

 

In order to solve these problems, the government and many institutions devote their attention to find a clean and easy approach to release the pollution and traffic jam. According to the actions above, some people may hold the opinion that the number of cars will decrease in the later twenty years, in some sense, there may be a new tool replacing the automobile. Although this makes some sense for many reasons: in order to release the heavy traffic conditions, many countries are busy building the subway line instead.

 

But I do not think the cars will be reduced in the next 20 years. For one thing, there are many developing countries like India and China, are engaged in developing their infrastructure facilities, without affluent financial support and the top engineers, it is such a tough job for them to use that high technology, eventually, they will pour much money in the highway building, therefore, the number of cars in these countries will expand during the next 20 years. Considering of their great population, the increasing cars in these regions will directly result in the fast growing number of cars all over the world.

 

To such a paramount reason, another must be added.

Based on the astoundingly high cost of the new technology, and other related infrastructures for the new transportation tools, in some degree, if something really is able to replace the car, it may takes at least 20 years or longer. Due to this reason, the cars will not decrease in the next 20 years.

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