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楼主
发表于 2005-11-21 10:29:00 | 只看该作者

明早要考试,在线急等答案

明天就要考试了,还有两道题的写法不确定,只好拿到这边来,请好心的人帮我看看






请教两道AA的写法

129. The following appeared in a memorandum from a regional supervisor of post office operations.>>


“During a two-week study of postal operations, the LACENAME w:st="on">PrestoLACENAME> LACETYPE w:st="on">CityLACETYPE> post office handled about twice as many items as the LACE w:st="on">LACENAME w:st="on">LentoLACENAME> LACETYPE w:st="on">City post office, even though the cities are about the same size. Moreover, customer satisfaction appears to be higher in Presto City, since the study found fewer complaints regarding the Presto City post office. Therefore, the postmasters at these two offices should exchange assignments: the Presto City postmaster will solve the problems of inefficiency and customer dissatisfaction at the Lento City office while the Lento City postmaster learns firsthand the superior methods of Presto City.”


觉得最后一句话有问题,但是不知道具体怎么说比较好



139. The following appeared as part of an article in a trade magazine.


“During a recent trial period in which government inspections at selected meat-processing plants were more frequent, the amount of bacteria in samples of processed chicken decreased by 50 percent on average from the previous year’s level. These results indicate that the trial schedule should be made permanent: by continuing with more frequent inspections, the government could thus cut in half the incidence of stomach and intestinal infections throughout the country. In the meantime, consumers of Excel Meats should be safe from infection because Excel’s main processing plant has shown more improvement in eliminating bacterial contamination than any other plant cited in the government report.”


找出了3个错误,大家帮我看看对不对



1,第一句,两件事只是先后发生,不一定有因果关系


2,即使有因果关系,在selected meat-processing plants 印证的道理也不一定能使用于throughout the country的plants


3,即使能使全国的amount of  baterial减少,也不说明 half the incidence of stomach and intestinal infections

另外,有没有人能给我讲讲关于AA中何时要用过去时,明天就要考试了,今天才发现自己的时态好象还没搞明白
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2005-11-21 18:39:00 | 只看该作者
只能自己顶了
板凳
发表于 2005-11-21 19:36:00 | 只看该作者
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地板
 楼主| 发表于 2005-11-21 20:29:00 | 只看该作者
不给我回答,却说这种话,这两道提都是这个月考过的,我都不会怎么安心?
5#
发表于 2005-11-22 01:36:00 | 只看该作者

AA 因果关系 假设 类比 调查 eithor-or准备5段,考时写3段,很容易的


明天考,看这些就算了吧 反正未必考到

6#
发表于 2005-11-22 01:47:00 | 只看该作者

第一个


1 质疑服务质量是否提高


(1)传递率提高,可能因为P城的交通变得更畅通;


(2) 投诉率减小,可能因为blablalba,不一定说明满意度提高;


2 即使以上成立,也就是说邮政服务质量得到改善,也不一定是局长的功劳,而可能是整个团队的力量,仅调动一个人事无法改善L城的邮政服务质量。


3 即使是局长的功劳,把L的局长调到P城,而这时候原来P的局长已经走了,所以原L局长也学不到很多经验,因为没人传授。


仓促想出来的,你看看行不行。

7#
发表于 2005-11-22 01:49:00 | 只看该作者

阿哦,楼主已经下了的说~


good luck

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