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肉肉公

题目：Itis not good to move to a new city or a new country because you will lose oldfriends.

Formost of us, we can't stay only at one place all life, and it's inevitable totake a new life in a new place just like studying abroad. Some people contendthat it will lose your old friends if you move to a new city. Whereas anotherpeople think that it's a brilliant chance to enlarge your friend connection. Inmy opinion, I take more inclination to second idea.

Firstly,in 21th century, the connection of us become more various and complex, we keepfriendship not just depend on face to face. Internet is a good vehicle for meand my friends. If you want to know how he/she is these days, Facebook recordingall what he has done or how he felt recently. Not only can you know what he hasdone, but also leaving a message for him about what you thinking. Furthermore,using leisure time to chat with your friends through the internet by Skype orQQ. Michael is my high school student and study abroad in MSU. Due to this, we approximatelymeet each other once or twice per year (the Christmas and the winter vacation).However, we always chat deeply in night every time when we meet in hometown andthere are endless topic we can talk, which due to keeping in touch by QQ thatwe know the life of each other. So my instance improves that distance isn't theobstacle for friendship.

Also,it's a brilliant chance to make some new friends. No matter working orstudying, you will meet a lot of people and then establish a new social connectionbetween them. As far as I see, friends are key element and catalyst which helpyou adjust a new atmosphere quickly. "Cease to struggle and you cease to live"by Thomas Carter. But what can you count on when struggling in a new place? Friends.For instance, I was born in Beijing and now studying at BNU in Guangzhou (southof China). I even can't speak dialect when firstly come here. After half ayear, I established the organization of Beijing students and some of them areclose friends for me. Furthermore, they help me to deal with many problems. Dueto them, I could live with happiness.

Inbrief, I contend that moving to a new city you won't lose old friends but makemore new friends.

mr.ming

However, we always chat deeply in night every time when we meet in hometown andthere are endless topic we can talk, which due to keeping in touch by QQ thatwe know the life of each other.这个句子我觉得短开两句比较好。建议。因为我个人觉得虽然是复合句，但有点冗长。
开头结尾都用了contend，其实可以换换的，虽然这个词显得高级一点。
No matter working orstudying,这个我读起来怪怪的，可以考证一下正确与否。
你的高级词汇有些还不错