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      Perhaps no issuein this world is as significant to people as being honest to your 去掉friends whichenable you to maintain a good relationship with your close partners. Despite variousresponses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding whether aperson can be always honest to his or her friends,太长了，简略一些 I, given the chance, preferto endorse that it is nearly impossible to have a persistent honest be persistent honestto people,especially your friends.

         First andforemost, as we all know, there are two terms in economics: comparativeadvantage and absolute advantage, which are tools to prove that trades can makeeveryone better off. So do exist in the ways we treat to our friends. I call itcomparative honest and absolute honest. You know太口语化, in our real dailylife, it is hardto say that people can be unchangeable and absolute honest to someone exceptsome soldiers. Also, good-hearted lies are usually seen as a blessing indisguise. So, I choose the comparative honest to describe this situation andsay in confidence that it is not a good idea to be absolute honest, even toyour friends.举例子

        What’s more, aman’s life is full of uncertainties. You cannot plan or predict everything inthe future, so making a promise to your friends such as being honest for alife-long time is obviously not a wise decision. All you should do is just totry your best to keep honest to him or her. That’s enough避免口语化. If you fail to dothat, your friends shouldwould forgive you in tosome degrees because we are all normalpeople who cannot avoid making mistakes in our life span. Hence, being honestfrom the start to the end is too difficult to finish it. 举例子

        On the other hand,it’s not uncommon to see white lies as a humorous way to make jokes with yourfriends. For instance, every year, when my girl friend’s birthday is around thecorner, I’ll lie himcolor] I’m would be busy during that thetime before her birthday, then goaround the downtown to prepare for her birthday gift just hoping to give her a surprise.Therefore, lies are not always a serious thing in some meanings.

        After ruminatingthose three above-mentioned reasons, I am fully convinced 说服读者而不是说服自己that being honest allthe time to your friends is impossible. Anyway, we should put this thing inperspective and have a perception the faiththat it is just a fact of our life.

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4.16 独立写作
     In the past, the ties linking neighbors are strong because the low level of development of material conditions material development impels people to ask help more often from their neighborhood. Whereas, in this day and age, the technology has grown by leaps and bounds, the dependence among neighbors, yet, is substantially weakened.   
     First and foremost, as we the 去掉know, the power of creative destruction is so tremendous that the connections between one people to and the other have been rechanged again and again, of course, including neighbors. Nowadays, people seem to be more prone to likely to use using Internet to communicate, whatever thing it is. So, the free talk time is less and less among neighbors for it is much happier to chat with your friends on the Internet instead of the person living nearby.  As a result, the gap is appearing slowly, the intention to seek help to neighbors is also becoming more reluctant reluctant 主语应该是人而不是intention than before.
     What's more, the service provide today is various, from house-moving to machine-fixing. Meanwhile, these services are professional and effective. Compared to direct to derectly recourse to neighbors for help, these services can diminish the time we cost and improve the productivity, more importanly, the price is not very expensive. Thus, in this situation when your car is broken or the house should be cleaned up entirely, poeple usually have a call to these service corporation rather than rely on their neighbors.
     On the other hand, the busier you are, the less time you meet with your neighbors.  It cannot be deniable is undeniable that modern people are under much pressure than before. They get up in the early morning and be are exhausted to come back late at night. It is no wonder that the relationship among neighbors is hard to develop further because their lives are nearly no points of intersection. Naturally, the not-so-good relationship is a transparent barrier for them to build solid ties to help each other more. Therefore, neighbors lean on each other less compared to the past people.
     After ruminating those three above-mentioned reasons, obviously, today, neighbors are more independent. They have a lot of ways to choose from besides their neighbors to solve a problem. Anyway, people depend on their neighbors less than the people in the past.
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