issue 114 善变之领导成就少

竹林中人

The change in a leader's policy implies the original one had certain flaws  动词是太感觉混乱，到底哪个是定语？
2.the leaders have to change his original decision to meet the people's opinion.  leaders 和his 不一致啊，小错误哦
3.In this case, the leader should prevent changing his policies or decisions easily and quickly.表述不当，leades 应该是避免或者说杜绝but not prevent自己changing his decision吧
4.最后说一点，总的来看，你的三个观点之间没有内在的联系，也就是说你的分论点没有逻辑性，根据题目意思，个人觉得你可以换种观点，prons and cons 既赞成也反对，在哪些时候应该遵从民意在哪些时候不应该？或者在哪个方面应该在哪个方面不应该？完全地反对或者肯定都不好完全说理。自己最好也学会例用最容易证明的论点为好