作文魔板5.5

xiaojie83

昨天才拿到作文成绩，比想象中好一点5.5。 稍微安抚了我被ETS伤痛的心灵（半年前GRE AWA的3.5）。

害怕重蹈GRE的魔板覆辙，所以这次的魔板使自己写的，不过没有什么规范，随性所致，仅供大家参考。希望能给和我一样对作文有心理障碍的朋友一点信心。

issue:

•         As every coin has two sides, there are always conflicts between … On this issue, some people claim that .. Because of …. On the contrary, other people prefer…. To choose A or B is always a dilemma to public. As far as I am concerned, I agree with A in several aspects.

•         Firstly, any discussion about the issue would inevitably involve the … of the two… On the one hand, A ..; On the other hand, B… Consequently,…

•         C is, however, only one of the factors that influence my preference on A. Another significant one is that…, A.. B, in contrast, …For example, …

•         Moreover，some people may neglect the fact that … To understand the truth, it is also important to

•         Admittedly, B also has a couple of merits, but it suffers from the disadvantage that.. Generally speaking, taking into account, its advantage outweigh its shortcomings, and that is why I choose A.

•         To sum up, taking into account all these factors discussed above, we can safely come to the conclusion that…

xiaojie83

忘记补充一点：一定要留3分钟检查拼写，从前我不知道这点所以觉得写得不错最后分数还很难看。这次toefl和gmat发挥不好倒都是5.5让我确信只要拼写结构够好，内容反而不算那么重要。只适用于机考，个人意见。

beautywawa

謝謝分享唷!!!