请教~~谢谢哦~~

sunnyharuko

1.Demonstrations public are an effitive means by which advocacy groups can bring inequalities to the attention of local,state,and federal officials.

2.Methods used in priparing articles for an encyclopedia differs,depending on the length of  the article.

3.Since the advent of rock music in the 1950's,the popular music of the United States has become a significant musical influence around world.

4.througout the 1930's,United States government patronage the arts was concentrated in the section of the Works Progress Administration knowns as Federal One.

5. A symbol of freedom, the Statue of Liberty represemts a woman has just escaped from the chains of slavery,which lie at her feet.

第三题是不是改成around the world.

第四题的patronage 要怎么改啊?

其它几题要怎么改啊?

happytoni

Demonstrations public are an effitive means by which advocacy groups can bring inequalities to the attention of local,state,and federal officials.

Demonstrations public 错，改成public　Demonstrations

melodybb1224

【必读】语法区第一贴 －《语法区版规》提问格式说明

请楼主mm按照发贴格式发贴，谢谢合作。

happytoni

2.Methods used in priparing articles for an encyclopedia differs,depending on the length of  the article.选Ｃ