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115 , Preference, Compare 刚写的,代劳你分析分析。

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发表于 2005-2-11 03:05:00 | 只看该作者

115 , Preference, Compare 刚写的,代劳你分析分析。

115. Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not to make any plans at all for their free time. Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans. Which do you prefer - planning or not planning for your leisure time? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.


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When faced with the dilemma of planning or not planning for your playtime, the answer which people prefer depends on personal experience, life style and emotional concern. In my part, I prefer to have a plan for my leisure time.


Before rendering my opinion in detail, it is necessary to take a glance at the position of not planning. It is no doubt that people can get totally relaxation when they don't make any plan for their free time. They can go to a beach as they like, watch TV or read the book at home. All these activities are determined at the time when they get a break; people can free their mind to do whatever they want.


But at the meantime, although not planning has some advantages, I insist that the benefits of planning are more apparently seen. I would explore a few important reasons to support my preference.


The main reason which is obviously seen by most people is that a good planed activity can make people more enjoyable. For instance, we may cite the sample mentioned above, playing at a beach can be very fun without disappointment if we check the weather and rent car to carry some supplements in advance. So we will know the weather is good for play and have enough supplies to relax.


There is another factor why I cast my propensity is that planning activities can let you have a trouble-free playtime. Suppose that, in a vacation, if you did not booked a air ticket and hotel, what will happen? You probably won't make a nice vacation. On the other hand, if you bought your tickets and booked your hotel, you will find your journey is quite easy and fun.


From what has been discussed above, we will find out that the benefits of planning carry more weight than those of not planning. Therefore we may safely draw a conclusion that a good plan for your spare time is an essential aspect to get relaxation.


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用了一些从TWE资料中的句子和套路组成的模板写的。谢谢大家能提供指教!



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发表于 2005-2-13 02:00:00 | 只看该作者

how many words there,and how many words that modle has?

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