Notre Dame 第一篇essay 大家一起讨论下如何，感觉没什么思路呀

zoey31

题目：Your responsibility as alifelong member of the Mendozacommunity is to Ask More of Business - to exemplify individual integrity,organizational excellence, and a concern for the greater good. How do you planto do this in your professional career?

我不太明白这篇需要我们写什么，是毕业后我的plan? 那我写我的career goal以及goal如何对社会有积极影响力？ 感觉写不长而且没有地方体现我的past（experience/strenghtn等）诶。 怪怪的。有木有好心人给点提示或者建议呀~~感激。

sportmann

这个essay要回答两方面的问题，第一是展示你个人的价值观，你的values, principles, character将如何推动企业有责任的发展，包括企业的领导力、品牌、社会价值等。第二是如何把你的价值观融入到你的职业发展过程中？想一想二十年后你要成为一个怎么样的leader?从后面望前想比较会有大局观。

zoey31

sportmann 发表于 2014-11-16 23:02
这个essay要回答两方面的问题，第一是展示你个人的价值观，你的values, principles, character将如何推动企 ...

谢谢sportmann 不知道是不是我经验浅了，感觉您给的方向好大，我有点无从说起 我尽力吧 嘻嘻 谢谢啦

JonFrank

Happy to help! And thanks for posting here. I am sure many, many people are also confused by this question, and by asking it in this forum, you're going to help many other applicants So, let's dig right in. This question doesn't just want you to write your career goals. If that's what they wanted to know, they'd say, "What are your post-MBA career goals?"

What THEY want is something deeper. Notre Dame puts a large focus on ethical business practices, and they want to make sure that every student that goes to their school is also dedicated to doing business in an honest, ethical way that is going to have a positive impact on the world around them. So they don't want to know what you want to do in your career, they want to know how you're going to do GOOD in your career. How do you plan to lead with integrity? To build a strong organization with strong values? To lead a business that is focused on improving the world around you, and, you know, not just making lots of money.

That's what they want to know. So you want to focus not just on the goals that you have, but how to plan to lead in a positive way. It's a great question, and also a tough one. It's not easy to think of a plan to do those things, but they want you to think and to think hard. This is a very important thing to this particular program, and they want to make sure they're only accepting students who also value integrity, organizational excellence and a concern for the greater good.

carandl

JonFrank 发表于 2015-1-8 16:38
Happy to help! And thanks for posting here. I am sure many, many people are also confused by this qu ...

Your advise about this topic is amazing!!!

JonFrank

Hope it can help you!

JonFrank

carandl 发表于 2015-1-8 16:49
Your advise about this topic is amazing!!!

Hope it can help you!

vivianwang2011

楼主，我也同申请nd， 但是对slide没有什么头绪，不知道应该做什么内容，楼主有什么建议？

zoey31

vivianwang2011 发表于 2015-1-12 14:59
楼主，我也同申请nd， 但是对slide没有什么头绪，不知道应该做什么内容，楼主有什么建议？ ...

不好意思 才看到。 我的slide是讲的我自己。因为essay主要讲了plan,讲了将来。所以我用slide的机会向AO介绍我的特点/过去/强项。 给你一点灵感~

ocho0521

看一下！