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sigrid_shan

0810占座：Modern society has become more complex,so it is essential for the young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

Living well in this modern world has become an increasingly tougher task, as we have to learn a lot to catch up with the latest technique and experience a lot to maintain the normal interaction with other social members. To cope with the difficulty bought by the complicated society, being capable of planning and organizing will definitely be one of the best strategies, which is especially meaningful for young people like us.

To begin with, in this era of information explosion, only when we know what we should learn and how we can obtain the knowledge step by step will we successfully become a quick and efficient learner, and that asks for the ability to plan and organize our learning process. Therefore it is no surprise that all excellent students and researchers are talented planers, including my cousin David. David studies in one of the top universities in our country and he is also the top student in his class. Not only being mastery in his major mathematics, but also speaking reasonable English, German and Japanese, he never fails to draw attention from other people. And when I ask for his magic code, he told me that he planed the study goals for each year and month, and every day before going to sleep, he just rethought, if all tasks he settled were finished. The learning method of David can be summarized as several simple words: to be well-planned and well-organized.

Moreover, the ability of planning and organizing has an essential meaning for our future career, and the better position we want to get, the more significant role planning and organizing play. For doing a good job, first of all, people must make careful plans to make sure all the work is under control and all the assignments will be down before the deadline, especially when they are faced with multiple tasks. For instance, almost all the employees in an international company have memos and time tables on their desks and computers. Furthermore, it is also vital for young people to plan for their career path so that they will take less tortuous path and achieve their career goals more directly - that is why almost every company and mba program asks their applicant, what are your long-term and short-term goals in career life?

When taking into account all the reasons I have numerated above, I would arrive atthe conclusion that, being able to plan and organize in a complicated world benefits young people in both working and studying, and there are still dozens of other reasons to argue for the importance of having the ability of planning and organizing, and all these reasons will be found in every aspect of our life.

MrWaiting

改完了，继续加油

sigrid_shan

It is much easier to achieve success without help from one's family than in the past.
原谅俺这次写的有点少，飞机晚点外加想不出论点论据来.....

It has become a common sense that people who are born rich and accept help from their families are much more easily to be successful. The phenomenon seems to be unfair for average people like us. However, the good news is that, from my point of view, the difficulty to achieve success for individuals without the help of their families nowadays decreases a lot compared to that in the past. Here are some reasons for why I believe the situation has been relieved these years.

First of all, receiving good education is no more the privilege of the wealthy so that poor youngsters can go to top schools and change their destiny by studying hard. For example, in the movie Homeless to Harvard: The Liz Murray Story, which was adapted by a real story, Liz successfully went to Harvard, the best University in the world, won the scholarship offered by a newspaper, got a great job after the graduation, even though she was homeless and abandoned by drug-addicted parents. She changed her way of life in a good way due to her perseverance and endeavor. Such things happened rarely in the past, because the knowledge was never as powerful as it is right now, and the education opportunity was monopolized by the upper class.

Also, the advent of information era makes the cost of the success much cheaper than before, so many young people can achieve their dreams by utilizing their intelligence and innovation. Mark Zuckerberg, the CEO and establisher of Facebook, for instance, was a college student and he made the business miracle by starting the very creative social network service. He did not ask for help from his family but the idea of him itself attracts billions of investment. We can still name many successful starters like Zuckerberg such as Li Yanhong, Ma Yun in China, to prove that Zuckerberg is not an exception. Nevertheless, owning a successful business several years ago was very costly and the only way to achieve it quickly and directly might be depending on the capital of the family.

When taking into accounts all the reasons and explanations I have numerated above, we could safely come to the conclusion that one's achievement of success without help from his or her family is not as tough as it was in the past, as people can receive better education to improve themselves and start their business without costing a fortune in advance.      

橙圆

么么哒~

sigrid_shan

0816     政府应该在医疗保障还是环境治理上花费更多精力

Environmental conservation and health-care improvement are hot topics these days: Both of them are essential to our society and none of them can be neglected if we want to make a better world. However, when comparing the importance of these two aspects, I would be one of those who agree that the environmental conservation is more significant, so more money and time should be used by the government for protecting the environment.

To begin with, a better environment means alot to our quality of life. Beautiful scenery is first of all a sort of gift weget from an unpolluted environment. People today can still dive or snorkel among the breathtaking coral reef, seeing the colorful fishes and other sea animals swimming, but when the ocean was polluted and the global warming makes some seaside islands vanish, our offspring will only read such beauty in their history books. Furthermore, wild animals can be protected also as a result ofthe protection of the environment. Manchurian tiger, for instance, is extinct due to the habitat loss and destruction and the same kind of tragedy occurs every day in this world. If we do not want to see other animals such as wild pandas die out in the near future, the government must definitely place priority on the environment conservation.

Moreover, the environmental improvement can help with the healthy problem so that the health care issues can be released toa great extend and on the other hand, environmental extremes do harm to humanhealth. Nevertheless, spending more money on health care issues will bring nodirect benefits to a better environment. For example, Minamata disease discovered in Japan last century was caused by polluted water discharged by a chemical factory. The water polluted and poisoned seafood as well as other animals thatfed on seafood. Then thousands of people died and more people were tormented bythe disease all the time. A similar case is the smog and haze in London in the19th century. The haze caused by air pollution also killed thousands of people and led to many other respiratory illness. All the diseases and health problems could have been solved or even prevented if the government protected the environment in the past. The history taught us a lesson that the environment protection is the premise of better health care.

When taking into accounts all the reasons I have nominated above we can safely come to the conclusion that compared with health care issues, the government should pay more attention to the environmental protection, as it is meaningful not only for our life quality butalso for our health condition.

daisy333

么么么么哒 好好学习了下~

sigrid_shan

橙圆 发表于 2014-8-14 14:29
么么哒~

致谢勤奋的小橙子 前儿看了忘回复

sigrid_shan

daisy333 发表于 2014-8-19 06:28
么么么么哒 好好学习了下~

么么哒，谢daisy~~~

sigrid_shan

  0819  tpo09  屁滚尿流的赶出来。。。

Both the writer and the professor focus on the topic, if hydrogen-based fuel-cell engines are much better than ordinary fuel engines. In the writing, the hydrogen-based cell fuel has been described as easily available, environmental friendly and economically competitive. The professor, however, claims that all such assumptions are incorrect.

As opposing to the writer's idea that because hydrogen resources are plentiful, the fuel-cell engines are easily to obtain as well, the professor states that hydrogen can not directly be used in the form of water, and pure liquid hydrogen is technologically difficult to produce. Citing the instance that the hydrogen must be kept in a very cold environment, he advances his argument that hydrogen power is not easy to get.

The professor continues to discredit the writing's assertion that it will solve the pollution problem, by stating the fact that producing pure hydrogen would creates a lot of pollution. Further, he points out that man has to burn coal and oil to produce pure hydrogen and that will cause severe air pollution.  

It is the professor's third argument that hydrogen-based fuel cell is not economical, which contradicts the view of the writer that it is more efficient than the normal fuel. The professor explains that, it is because a rare and expensive metal named platinum has to be used to produce the engines. That makes the production of hydrogen-based fuel cell very costly.

In a summary, all the above-mentioned reasons of the recture illustrate that the professor disagree with the points mentioned in the reading passage.