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redpassion · 发表于 2003-8-20 21:06:00

好了，祝你好运~~~

gtren · 发表于 2003-8-20 22:58:00

"we can safely arrive the conclusion that … "? Haha., arrive is a intransitive verb, it's probably much better to use the word "reach".

redpassion · 发表于 2003-8-21 00:12:00

是的，不好意思，reach或者get to 呵呵，谢谢指出

tobyzhang529 · 发表于 2003-8-21 02:25:00

请问redpassion大大，你上次的作文分数出来了么？

redpassion · 发表于 2003-8-21 02:30:00

5.5分扣了7分
郁闷ing~~~

tobyzhang529 · 发表于 2003-8-21 02:41:00

就是用这篇模板写的么？

redpassion · 发表于 2003-8-21 02:47:00

恩，当然这就是我自己的模版也~~~
呵呵

tobyzhang529 · 发表于 2003-8-21 06:04:00

厉害厉害，小弟对你的敬仰犹如滔滔江水，连绵不绝。又如黄河泛滥，一发不可收拾！！！！

hwhwhw · 发表于 2003-8-21 06:58:00

redpession, can you send me your writing model and some pieces of writing you write by this model.

I will have the test on Aug.26, and now i didn't prepare for the wriinting and i even have no time to look at the topics. Sigh......

When i finished my test, i will post my JJ . that's a promise!

My email. hwhwhw20000[在] yahoo.com

Thanks a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

redpassion · 发表于 2003-8-21 07:29:00

no problem,cheer up!!!

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