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楼主
发表于 2003-7-21 22:59:00 | 只看该作者

我的作文模版

呵呵,虽然牛人觉得很幼稚,但是这确实可以得高分
实力很重要,但是方法也重要。
不要担心用同样的模版会被老师发现,呵呵
先是机器批改的,骗了机器什么都好说
而且一个老师一天2000多份作文,是人都记不住,而且ETS老师几千个,不可能你我的作文放在一起的,就算在一起,机器给了高分,他也无能为力,最少给你5分,呵呵


还有理由12杀手锏

4和5楼有文本


不好意思,好久没来了

很多兄弟姐妹都说下载不了,我今天试了,可以下载,


如果不行加我msn:redpassion831010(A) hotmail.com

我会在msn上打包发给你们的

呵呵

摸版可以自己换得,不一定就是这样死的

适当换些适合自己的东西进去反而会更好,呵呵

加油咯大家~



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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2003-7-21 23:15:00 | 只看该作者

怎么又不行咯?嗬嗬
晕~~

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板凳
发表于 2003-7-21 23:21:00 | 只看该作者
I can't download it, can you send it to helen1722[在] yahoo.com ?
Thanks a lot.
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2003-7-21 23:49:00 | 只看该作者

There are some people who think A is better,but others prefer to B.But I would have to say that, if I were faced with this issue, I would probably follow A(B). In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.

No issue is more important now than the one that refers to reason 1 History witnesses and presents many examples. …Don’t you think these examples quoted above are very persuasive?

reason 2 is another head and chief reason that I have chosen to put here. It is no better illustration that can demonstrate the view. … If you can see that, you can understand it more deeply.

Superior as A(B) is, however, A(B) or B(A)  also has own demerits, too. … Nevertheless, the advantages of A carry more weight than that of disadvantage of A, so the most striking conclusion is obvious.

To sum up, given the reasons discussed above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we can safely reach the conclusion that …  In fact, not only do I prefer to A(B), but also prefer to 一个建议 as ### as possible.  







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 楼主| 发表于 2003-7-21 23:51:00 | 只看该作者
第二段关键,两个层面。

There are some people who voice serious doubt about A and who prepare to argue with A, but I would have to say that, if I were faced with the direction, I would probably follow B. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.

    No issue is more important now than the one that refers to 1  History witnesses and presents many examples. …Don’t you think these examples quoted above are very persuasive?

    2 is another head and chief reason that I have chosen to put here. It is no better illustration that can demonstrate the view. … If you can see that, you can understand it more deeply.

    Superior as A is, however, it also has own demerits, too. … Nevertheless, the advantages of A carry more weight than that of disadvantage of A, so the most striking conclusion is obvious.

    To sum up, given the reasons discussed above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we can safely reach the conclusion that …  In fact, not only do I prefer to B, but also prefer to B+++ as ### as possible.  

作文理由12杀手锏
其实作文就是鬼扯,没花头~~~~
1。方便(convenience)
2。情感(sensibility)
3。经验(experience)
4。成就(achievement)
5。效率(efficacy)
6。健康(health)
7。节俭(thrift)
8。安全(safety)
9。性格培养(character cultivation)
10。乐趣(fun)
11。耐久(endurance)
12。环保(environment protection)








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6#
发表于 2003-7-22 00:15:00 | 只看该作者
what is it? essay type for p2?
7#
 楼主| 发表于 2003-7-22 00:18:00 | 只看该作者
toelf作文模版
8#
发表于 2003-7-22 00:51:00 | 只看该作者
all essay?
9#
 楼主| 发表于 2003-7-22 01:06:00 | 只看该作者
恩,对所有的都可以的185通吃
不信你说一个题目,我来套这个模版
10#
发表于 2003-7-22 02:25:00 | 只看该作者
Give us an example on how to use your templete, ok?

For this:
What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
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