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2014-1-29
题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should assign home work for students everyday after school.

Homework is the best criteria that determains/reveals their/students performances at school. It’s a review of the knowledge learned from class. It’s also a transfer from knowledge to skills. Homework, which is related to some exercises in accordance of the daily class assigned for the students by the teachers, it is usually considered as the best feedback of student’s school performance for teachers to examine their teaching quality and can do a great benefit to review the knowledge from class for students to strengthen the understanding of the intellectual substance.A recent debate in education fields argued that whether teachers should assign homework or not. Some of my friends suggested that teachers shouldn’t assign homework, they should let students to study from outside of class. But in my opinion, teachers should assign home work everyday.

The chief reason why I advocate the standpoint above is that Homework can help students to gain a lot of things besides academic knowledge. It is undeniable that homework is a good way to for students to review the current lessons and lay a solid foundation for the further study in the subject, while, it also can train their ability of responsibility and independency when they are doing their homework, take my studying experience as an example, meanwhile, the students can also cultivate their ability to dominate their time of study. Plus, some creative homeworks can also help students to have great mind and thoughts. For example, we once did a scientific homework about researches on volcanoes, one of my classmates get  

Another special consideration in this case is that Teachers can have interaction with students in homework/ comprehensive understanding about their teaching and student’s learning through homework. They can know the problem in students’ homework and can solve their question very quickly and on/in time. They can also know a student’s recent study attitude, if there’s a problem, they can help students to get out of the bad mood very quickly so that they can study better. By consulting the student’s homework, teacher could adjust their teaching ways, lessons and even the whole schedule of their teaching flexibly.

Admittedly, For parents, this can be a way to let them understand their children’s ways of study. They can use their own experience to teach their children. And it’s a chance of interaction between a bond of blood. For example, my mother always observe my statement of studies by checking my homework and know my recent situations by communicating with my teachers. my homework plays a bridge of communicate between home and school.

It is high time that we put considerable emphasis on teachers should assign homework to students.

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2014-2-1  TPO1

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.

Have you always kept a habit of doing sports? Are you ignoring the importance of your communication between the people around you? Did you think these things are not so important compared to your studies? A recent between university finance managers and principals argued about whether they should spent school budget on students’ sports and social activities. Part of the students think only the credits and performances are urgent in school life. They begin to give up the chances of the running or swimming chances they once always do, they begin to talk less with their neighborhood. They only travels between the school, library, and their home or dorm. Personally I hold the idea of students’ health and social communication abilities should also be valued by school’s prior executives.

Firstly, doing sports can have a positive influence on their mental cares and their physical selves. A research between students that do sports and those who don’t showed that the students who exercised have a stronger body and can handle their study better. Take a real story happened in university. There’s this student that works extremely hard, she doesn’t work out at all based on the reason that doing this can save more time to study. Of course in this way she can have extra time to study. But she got too overboard and got sick which caused her didn’t even catch up the final exam. Plus, doing well in a particular kind of sport can develope more options of future doings or creating a very well interest in daily activities. One of my uncle became an athlete because he likes badminton and he made a living and personal interest out of this.

Secondly, doing social activities can develope some more comprehensive communication skills by making social contacts with different kinds of people and base on the future careers. They can know how to talk appropriately in the social environment. Like this one cousin of mine. He gained a lot of experience by sending out posters of a play and simply illustrate the play to the costumers. It’s a simple and common social activity but it still taught him how to deal costumers. He became a great sales person.


The last but not least consideration is that social contacts can make firm foundation for our future careers. We can made certain relationships that can helps to find jobs easier or to determain a job even before graduating. And by doing such things, we can earn working experiences which is vital for future career finding. Just like one of the elder students in our neighborhood took an internship at the Microsoft company by a recommendation of his professor, then, when he graduates, he really got the job he was doing as intern.

To sum up all these benefits exposed in reality, schools should spent part of their budget to make opportunities for students to take actions on these activities. Such as open up chances of sports training and make opportunities for internship or courses for students preparasion for this. With the help of the school, students can spent less time to find the opportunities and have more strength to consider their performances on their internships. They can have a wide platform of future livings, no matter in sports, or in social environments.

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2014-2-4
前两天在姥姥家没有网，前面几篇老师改过的我又重写了下，请老师们多多指点，谢谢！

题目：Children should spend most of their time studying or playing; they shouldn’t be required to help the family with household chores, such as cleaning and washing.

An arousing argue about whether children should do any chores beside their study has come into view of the education field. Some hold to the idea that the study nowadays has come into a white-hot era, the children should put all their concentration on their studies. Others believe that children should do some chores that can benefit their mentle health. Both sides have very convincing points and examples, I personally believe that children should do their usual chores. I will demonstrate my point of view in the following passage.

The first thing that come to my consideration is the tight bond between a child and his/her family. The lack of communication has shown more commonly in recent families. Doing housework with family members can draw the distance between them. They can have more interaction and more common languages in daily life. Take myself for instance. There has been a blank of communication between me and my mother, it was during my final exam preparation time. When I finally get over the exam, I found that the conversations between us has became pretty awkward, because I missed the recent events and didn’t have any common languages to talk to her. So we made a clean-up on a Sunday, we talked about the steps of cleaning and did a few chats of recent happenings. This event let me catch up with the recent events and erased the weird atmosphere between my family.

Secondly, a quiet ordinary scene seen in every family is their children buried head deep in to massive study missions. They are often extremely exhausted and frustrated after a long period of study. So they have to do something to reduce the tiredness, right? In that time, doing chores will be a good choice. Not only can it help you stretch up your body but can also create a better environment for the continuing studies. I remember my neighbor, John. During his preparation for his SAT test, his room is quiet a mess, his mother talked out of him to clear up his room on Saturday. After he did his housework, in spite of getting more exhausted like he thought, he became more energetic and developed a fresh mood because of the great environment all around him.

Last but not least, the children nowadays don’t have too good habits. They usually doesn’t have the concept of being clean. The lack of this virtue can cause a difficult of learning respect in the future life. Like when we are living with a roommate in college but the roommate always make a big mess in our dorm room. We would be very mad and doesn’t like him. It does the same effect to us, if we doesn’t understand this rule when we are little, we would be disliked too. Due to this consideration, I think we should do housework with our parents in our childhood. Because our parents had already been in the society and they know a lot more about good habits and virtues, they can teach us from daily things like, what we had been saying, doing housework. Of course we can gain a lot of knowledge from studying but to learn such good character has to come from the things we do.

Due to all this factors, I strongly hold to the prospect that children should do housework with their family members.

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2014-2-4
题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should assign home work for students everyday after school.

When the rising development come more obviously in our lives, they expectation in education rises continuingly. Students were expected to perform better and better and required to a lot more. Because of this recent change, the need of teachers assigning homework to children is being questioned and argued between both the students and the teachers. Part of the publicity convinced that children doing homework is unnecessary because they can learn a lot not only in their usual academic studies but also outside in the leisure exercises. But others believe that homework is indispensable in study. I, for one, agrees with the latter point of view. I will explain my consideration above this question.

The quality of one day’s study is always being valued. I for instance, would try to do some review on my study everyday. Homework is a seemingly good way for exercising a day’s learnings. They can help us reinforce the knowledge we had gain on classes. Plus, during the process of doing homeworks, we can also find the flaw and weak point in our studies, in which case we can mend the problem on time and very accurately. Saving the chance that we might perform badly in tests later on. Take myself for example, I once find a point in my study that I have overlooked during doing homework. It was on the day right before my middle-term exam. I mend the blank in my study right on time and performed quiet well on that test.

A negative influence of computer games and websites has increased because of the development in technology. Students had less and less interest in their studies. Homework however, because of its necessity, can play a positive part to gain interest in study for students. Because when they are doing homeworks, they can find more things that they don’t know, and developing a wide interest to find the answer. For example, we once had a very bad impression about our science class, which doesn’t have any homework. But once our teacher assigned a homework telling us to find out about how the plants obtain nutrition. We didn’t know about that, so we went to find the answer, we found that once we find a little part, there are always relative knowledge we don’t know. That draw a large interest and curiosity in this class.

Another important part homework can play is in our daily friendships. There aren’t too much common languages that students can draw between each other because of the difference in personal interests. But doing homework together can fix a better relationship between students. They can exchange their ideas on their studies and learn unknown or hard knowledges from those who know the answer, which also creates a better learning environment in class .  

Because of all this benefits shown before my eyes, I had come to the conclusion that teachers assigning home work is a necessary and correct movement, such movement is proved to gain more than learning seldom knowledges outside of studying .

请老师们多多指教，谢谢老师！

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It is easier for people in the past to identify which type of career or job has a secure or successful future.

To determine which kind of career is more successful has always been a troubling situation for those who just came in to the social environment. This question is proven to be one of the hardest questions one will face in his/ her life. On the history of the consideration in this question has always been quiet doubtful. Some say that people from the past has fewer options and less concerns since the world had not developed so much. But others say that just because we have more options to choose, determine careers became easier nowadays. Personally, I hold to the idea that it is easier to commit a fit career in the modern world.

The first thing that came to my consideration is that the development of technology has created more technological tools for us to use. With the increase of such inventions, the need for work that is relative to them will also increase. As such post is created, more people will get a larger field of choosing and a wider platform of producing themselves. But, bringing the past people to compare, we would find that because of the lack of development, people were forced to choose only in the seldom posts they can find. Take my family for example. My grandfather is an expert at computer technology, but because computers were not so popular back then, he didn’t get a job he likes. Instead he became a writer. But another case in the modern society is different. One of my brothers took some technology courses in college and did very well, like my grandfather he wishes to find some work that has connection with computers. He was hired by the Microsoft company immediately after graduation.

Secondly, I believe the finance statement of the society nowadays has reached a steady point. Unlike in the old days when all the countries were still at the settling period,which all careers may face the danger of being fired or the decrease of salary, our job posts always have a steady working environment and a steady or even up-lifting salary. Take the 18th contrary for example. The American folks always faces the banking of stocks or the abase of goods or livestocks. Some even have to find western fields for development.

Last but not the least consideration is that modern people can actually gain experience from the failures of past people. Like the example that the lack of consideration that led to an unfit and unpleasant job. We gain experience from it and didn’t make such mistakes when it cames for us to choose. There are even people that does such things professionally, the ones that help people to determine the career that is most appropriate for them. This kind of aid has been more commonly seen in recent years, which made people make less wrong choices and find their fit post the first time they graduate.

To sum up all these factors, I believe that it is high time that we come to the conclusion that modern people has more options and advantages to find a fit career than the people from our past. Because we had gain experience from the wrong deeds they had done.

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Parents should allow their children to make mistakes and allow them to learn from their own mistakes.

All parents love their children more than anyone in the world, but just because this special love they hold for their children, sometimes led to high expectations on their children or strict gestures they do to their children. Just because the rising expectations on their children, they sometimes forbidden children to make potential mistakes. This kind of phenomenon has led the discussion about education into a white-hot era. A lot of parents hold to the point that mistakes should be wiped out and children shouldn’t make such mistakes. The others convinced that children making mistakes is very common and very normal, parents shouldn’t make such a fuss about it. I for one, agrees with the latter point of view. I will illustrate my consideration above this question with the following points.

First of all, the high expectations may cause tremendous pressure on children. They could be more afraid to show themselves before parents for they are afraid to do it wrong. They could also be afraid to explore new things because trying the first time may do the thing not rightly. This will led them to miss finding their potential and lose the chance of developing it. And it would cause the child not wanting to show up at anything, which would led to a shy character. Take one of my classmate for example. He was always scolded by his parents for doing something not excellently, so afterwards, whenever there are events in the class, he is afraid to be a part of it. There’s this one time that someone at the television report want to choose someone that is good at math, he is the perfect one, but he refused it. He missed a lot of chances which may led to his future successes.

Secondly, a child’s heart and mentality can be very fragile. The strict movements can hurt a child’s heart and may take a long time to recover from it. Because they take every thing very seriously and may mess up in self blame. There’s this time my sister made some mistakes in her reading exercises when she is quiet little, her mother scolded her quiet madly, she took a long time to recover. As a sequel of that scolding, she is still afraid to speak in public which led to her frequent failure in her job interviews.

The third point that let me convince this view is this one time I found out my brother hiding his

grades from his parents. It’s because he was also blamed of his grades, he became not wanting the parents to know about his situations. When children forbidden to make any mistakes, they might hide their flaws from parents and learn to deceive them. This will cause a even more serious problem than it is before. So if it is for me, I would try to understand them and let them to fix up themselves.

Due to all these consideration and true examples happening around me, I came to the conclusion that children should be allowed to make mistakes. Of course there are certain problems they can’t solve by themselves, which would need parents to help them, and there are some specific problems they can never made. But most of the time, it is better for parents to let them handle questions by themselves.

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大人应不应该给小孩子钱作为成绩奖励。

Should the parents give money to children as a reward of their good grade in school?

The good grade on a report list is always the most wanted scene to both parents and children. When children finally earned a good grade by hard working. Parents would always give them rewards as an encouragement. Recently the case that rewards turned in to money has become common. Some objected to this gesture saying that it is bad for parents to let children set hand on money. But there are reasons to suggest that children actually gains a positive influence when they handle money. I will show these examples in the following passage.

First of all, to hand out money as a reward on their studies, not only is an accomplishment on their study and their hard working, but is also an assure on their ability of handling valuable things such as money. Children can get more courage and energy to do even better than they can do at present, causing a positive cycle on their future studies. A student in my sister’s school, Amy, always gets amazing scores, its just because her parents give a reward like that to assure her that she has the ability to do better.

Further more, money can do a lot of good deeds that can influence children in a completely different angle. For what we know, money can be used on all kinds of things. Children can use the money to buy books or save it for a tour. It can widen their point of view in a different and more effective way. For them, it is a new world, which would help them to have more curiosity to explore more knowledge, playing an important part in their future studying characters. My friend, Tom, always uses his earned money to buy historical books, he has an enormous interest in history because of a book he bought himself when he was little, he was drawn in to the world of history ever since.

The last but not least benefit parents can make by rewarding children money, is that they can get children to understand the precious value of money. To let them understand that money is uneasy to get. This movement can encourage children to know they need to work hard to gain money, which can set up the conscious about earning, and cut up the usual problems of wasting we can see from children nowadays. Jenny, a girl of 10, can arrange a weeks spent for their family, such as how much they can spent on grocery, how much spent on buying clothes. She started to planning for her pocket money when she was only 5, which set up the concept of saving money and not spending it in vain. From this we can see clearly that let children to handle their money on their own has actually made a positive influence and a silent model for the children’s concept about money.

To sum up all these considerations, I can come to the conclusion without any hesitation, that parents should give children money as a reward in study. For its important part of positive influence on both the children’s study and their life characters.

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Do you agree or disagree to the fact that telephones have more influence to people than televisions do.

Telephones play an important part in this technological period, it interferes with people’s work, friendship, and the communication in family bond. It is called the bridge between far distances. But some say that televisions are equally or even more important than telephones do. It plays a part in people’s entertainment world. But in my opinion, I believe that still, telephones holds a vital role in the technology nowadays.

First of all, like most people say, televisions can act in our entertainment and news gaining product. But there’s way too much more that telephones can do. It can draw the distance between long distances, let families to connect each other, keep old and new friendships by always contacting them, or even be a vital material in business contact. For example, I’ ve always contacted my parents in school for them to know my statement, and I always call my friends to ask questions. In that way we can also gain extra knowledge that we didn’t expect after shool.

Secondly, televisions can’t help us to know very much. Yes, we do gain reports or updating events from new on television, but there’s still much that we won’t know.  Instead, because of the constant connection and all those persons we contact with, information came with the wide-spread  touching environment. Take a news a few years ago, when Korea was electing its president, we all gained this information from telephones, some people got tips from Korean people and passed this information on. So there’s plenty of people aware of this event some time before this news is on air.

Last but not the least, televisions actually rely on telephones to offer its information. The people that does the news learned their sources using telephones to contact the origin source line. Like the opera that is shown only early in this year “the news night”, they gained their information by contacting the source lines, such as the white house or those who are at the scene of happened events. I remember one particular example is that they gained the knowledge that Ben Laden was taken down by referring of the white house.

To sum up all these factors, we may come to the conclusion, that telephones plays an important part in people’s life, even in the use of televisions. Which made it more important in people’s lives.

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Should we require our young children (age 5-10) to learn music and art in addition to math, science, history, and language.

Children at this particular age is considered to be the best age of learning things. For all we know, once people grow old, there’s a lot of things they cannot do. There has always been a lot of argument in education fields about whether they should let children to learn art and music at this age. Some says that it’s a waste of time to learn such things and they should concentrate on their studies. But because personally, I’ve learned piano when I was little, so due to my personal experience, I suggest to the idea that children really should learn art and music at this age.

First of all, like I’ve said before, children are best at absorbing knowledges, they don’t have any limit about what they can do and what they can’t. So the so called potential is bestly raised in this age. They can also obtain interest at the same time. Take two examples to compare. One of my neighbor’s daughter was asked to play violin when she was 6, she gained interest on it and when she was 13, she still loved it. But on the other hand, one boy in my piano class has just started learning it when he was 15, he had trouble practicing it and resented it. He didn’t even past his second grade test.

Secondly, the work of students in senior school or high school is proven to be massive. They don’t have much time to put mind on the study of such things. The academic study burdens the children so that they are not available to practice, which would delay the process of studying. But children at this particular age doesn’t have so much studying work to do and they have enough time to concentrate on fostering their technics. Lets compare me and my sister. When I went into senior school, I doesn’t have so much time to practice my skills. But instead, my sister, at the age of 7, have plenty of time to practice. So she is now a even better player than I am. So I am gaining a conclusion with out hesitating that at the age 5 - 10 is really the golden age of learning such potential things.

Last but not least, this kind of study can interfere with their character in the future. Children at this age is also considered to be the vital age of determine their characters. Learning music and art can help them to have a calm confident character which is very good for their future lives. Again, I think myself is the best example. I was once a very naughty and active kid. But ever since I’ ve learned piano, I can settle down to do things instead of running everywhere or jump up and down without stopping.

Due to the careful consider on my own case, I think I can come to the conclusion that learning art and music has way more advantages than doesn’t. Because of all the benefits it give no matter in characters or in our interests for life. And they can be gained so early in our childhood.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All school teachers should be required to take courses every five years to update their knowledge?

The changes in our century is tremendous. There are always updates, no matter in science, math, music, art. In order to catch up with the development, teachers have to find a way to learn all these new findings. But some say that teachers are alright with the knowledge they already had and do not have to learn all these things. I, personally thinks that teachers do need to take such courses to know more. Because it can have a positive influence on the students they are teaching and themselves. Or maybe, even on the development of one country. I will demonstrate my view in the following passage.

For students, they need newest information about their knowledge, for they have to go to work in the future, and in need of those knowledge they have gain, they cannot have old information. If the teacher does not inform them about the changes, it would cost harm to their future careers. Take the telephones for example. The development of such digital tools have always been changing. If the teacher kept the information about changes done in such fields, when a student goes to work, he won’t know about the skills and could not keep up with the work.

Besides the reality side of the question, there is no harm to learn such things. Which can bring benefits both to the teachers and the students. Learning new things is always positive for people. The process of the learning and exploring fascinating new deeds, in the mean while, is a great process. For whats more, if the students learn more, they might attach to the news and develope themselves better. They might have more creative minds or greater ideas. One of my politic class can serve as an example. My teacher learned the new policy coming up about forbiddening smoking. This new policy led to further consideration in the class. We made discussions about the harm of smoking, and the virtue badness in it. Someone even made suggestions about other things he think would be necessary to change.

To gain the knowledge does not only effect the students and teachers that has set hands on it. For as far as we know, the students now will be the main source of development in the future. To update their known for the country’s remaining statement helps them to know how to help the rise a country’s develope. There has been a known story that in China Yuan Long ping was born knowing the crops people born is not exactly beneficial for people. So when he is grown in to an adult, he grown out intergraded crops and massively increased the crop’s quality.

To gather up all these factors and example, it is time that we may come to the conclusion that teachers should take courses to learn knowledge.