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Louiswt

TWE59Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done.  
Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which  
do  you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There has been a controversy nowadays over the issue of whether or not it is worthwhile to go places and get things done in hurry. As far as I concerned, I strongly support that doing everything quickly is an excellent habit for at lease two reasons. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence yo support my viewpoint.

To begin with, being in a hurry to go places and geting things done mean efficiency. Nowaday social competition become more and more fierce, you have to show your ability to no matter your boss in company or your teacher in school. Efficiency, one of the most important abilities, which always attract bosses, plays a vital role in your life. If you can do everyting quickly, you will leave an efficient impression to your boss, and then your chance which can help you get a better position will be bigger.

Secondly, assignments are not countless, if you can raise your speed, you have more time to develop your own interests. Nowadays, the all-round person, who has not only high working efficiency but also excellent interests, can attract all big cross-country incorporations’ attentions. Many people might feel confused that why so much time they have that they can develop their interests so wonderful. In that the genral public always do not pay attentions how efficiently the all-round peole work.

However, dissenters may argue that working slowly can avoid mistakes. Obviously, considering this issue from my perspective, “time is money”, I do not think slow work can avoid mistakes obsolutely, I prefer raising the speed to working slowly. In addition, working fast do not mean working careless.

In sum, taking into account above mentioned reasons, which are adequate and persuasive, the conclusion is obvious: after extermely examined all aspects of this two different life styles, going to places and getting things done in hurry is more vital, not only that can attract your boss, but also can help you develop yourself.

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-1-12 11:58:41编辑过]

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以下是引用Louiswt在2005-1-11 12:27:00的发言：

TWE59Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done.  
Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which  
do  you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There has been a controversy nowadays over the issue of whether or not it is worthwhile to go places and get things done in hurry. As far as I concerned, I strongly support that doing everything quickly is an excellent habit for at lease two reasons. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence yo support my viewpoint.

To begin with, being in a hurry to go places and geting things done mean efficiency. Nowaday social competition become more and more fierce, you have to show your ability to no matter your boss in company or your teacher in school. Efficiency, one of the most important abilities, which always attract bosses, plays a vital role in your life. If you can do everyting quickly, you will leave an efficient impression to your boss, and then your chance which can help you get a better position will be bigger.

Secondly, assignments are not countless, if you can raise your speed, you have more time to develop your own interests. Nowadays, the all-round person, who has not only high working efficiency but also excellent interests, can attract all big cross-country incorporations’ attentions. Many people might feel confused that why so much time they have that they can develop their interests so wonderful. In that the genral public always do not pay attentions how efficiently the all-round peole work.

However, dissenters may argue that working slowly can avoid mistakes. Obviously, considering this issue from my perspective, “time is money”, I do not think slow work can avoid mistakes obsolutely, I prefer raising the speed to working slowly. In addition, working fast do not mean working careless.

In sum, taking into account above mentioned reasons, which are adequate and persuasive, the conclusion is obvious: after extermely examined all aspects of this two different life styles, going to places and getting things done in hurry is more vital, not only that can attract your boss, but also can help you develop yourself.

不是斑竹， 呵呵。

不要这样发贴吧， XD。 斑竹都是义务的。 考友之间互相修改不好么？

Louiswt

SORRY 求改心急..

请各位帮忙~~

melodybb1224

以下是引用Louiswt在2005-1-11 12:27:00的发言：

TWE59Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done.  
Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which  
do  you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There has been a controversy nowadays over the issue of whether or not it is worthwhile to go places and get things done in hurry. As far as I concerned, I strongly support that doing everything quickly is an excellent habit for at lease two reasons. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence yo（to) support my viewpoint.

To begin with, being in a hurry to go places and geting things done means efficiency. Nowadays social competition become(s) more and more fierce, you have to show your ability to no matter your boss in company or your teacher in school. Efficiency, one of the most important abilities, which always attract bosses, plays a vital role in your life. If you can do everyting quickly, you will leave an efficient impression to your boss, and then your chance which can help you (that you can)get a better position will be bigger.

Secondly, assignments are not countless, if you can raise your speed, you will have more time to develop your own interests. Nowadays, the all-round person, who has not only high working efficiency but also excellent interests, can attract all (太绝对了）。big cross-country incorporations’ attentions. Many people might feel confused that why so much time they have that they can develop their interests so wonderful. In that the genral public always do not pay attentions how efficiently the all-round peole work.

However, dissenters may argue that working slowly can avoid mistakes. Obviously, considering this issue from my perspective, “time is money”, I do not think slow work can avoid mistakes obsolutely, I prefer raising the speed to working slowly. In addition, working fast do not mean working careless.

In sum, taking into account above mentioned reasons, which are adequate and persuasive, the conclusion is obvious: after extermely examined all aspects of this two different life styles, going to places and getting things done in hurry is more vital, not only that can attract your boss, but also can help you develop yourself.

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Louiswt

谢谢JJ...

霓裳17

祝考试顺利。