10.29 独立写作

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Doyou agree or disagree with the statement: In modern times, parents will learnmore from
children than children learn from parents?

As the saying goes: parents are the bestteachers of the children, there is no doubt that children can learn a lot thing—suchas how to get along with people, the way to master time--- from their parents.But on no account can we ignore the virtue of the children-- sincere, creativeand upbeat which is far more than what children can learn from parents.

To begin with, children are more honestthan most adult. Adults are sophisticated, in most instance, they will considerthe consequence in to account while the children just tell the truth. Take GeorgeWashington as an example, when he was young he cut down a cherry tree, andadmitted it. What if it is another adult did it? He might deny the behavior forhe didn’t be able to compensate for the tree. The children aren’t secular, italso makes them very optimistic.

Furthermore, children can always see the hopefulaspect of life. The famous experiment shows that, when there is half cup oftea, children are happy for there is ‘still’ a half cup of tea to drinking,whereas adults might disappointed by there is ‘only’ a half. Being anoptimistic spirit can make our life more beautiful. Moreover, adults shouldlearn how to break the limitation of common sense.

Finally, children are more creative. Thanksto their lack of ‘common sense’. Their world of thought has no boundaries. Theyalways have the thoughts that surprise us. Many great inventers begun their wayof invent when they were very young. For instance, Edison created the automatictiming transmitter when he was 15 years old.

If there anyone who still doubts whether thereis anything parents can learn more from children. Who still wonders if it ispossible that children can teach more than what they can learn from theirparents. the essay is my answer.

修一一

改好啦~~~一起加油！

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修一一 发表于 2013-10-30 13:04
改好啦~~~一起加油！

改的好细。。。。。。我语法一直有问题啊就没有怎么好过，高考的时候也是这样。。。。。语法基本凭语感啊。。。。。。。。顺便问一下by后面能不能加从句？

修一一

用户名已被注册 发表于 2013-10-30 13:55
改的好细。。。。。。我语法一直有问题啊就没有怎么好过，高考的时候也是这样。。。。。语法基本凭语 ...

我以前语法也不行，考过GMAT以后一般的文章是写不出什么语法错误了，你要是肯花精力提高这一块的话，研究研究GMAT语法不错的。  by 这个词是介词，介词后面只能接名词或动名词（也就是只能充当名词的东东），不能接句子。