请教一个写essay的问题！！！

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各位大侠，

我想问一下，有多少同学写essay是找了美国的consultant呢？效果如何？有同学不找consultant自己写然后成功录取的么？谢谢了！

pkunanaz

我也是今年申请，所以没有“过来人”的经验。不过在CD上泡了很久，据我所知，找consultant的是少数，不找consultant自己写然后成功录取的人多了去了。。。

供参考，有不对的请指正~

littlehannah

有时间的话DIY一般问题不大，不过文书找有经验的人看看挺好的，有时候帮助会很大。即使找人帮忙，自己都要好好提供素材

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pkunanaz 发表于 2013-9-19 22:26
我也是今年申请，所以没有“过来人”的经验。不过在CD上泡了很久，据我所知，找consultant的是少数，不找co ...

感谢~让我心里有了一些底 申请加油哇！

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littlehannah 发表于 2013-9-19 23:17
有时间的话DIY一般问题不大，不过文书找有经验的人看看挺好的，有时候帮助会很大。即使找人帮忙，自己都要 ...

明白了，多谢啦！

lindalibinbin

Even if you don't rely on consultant, you still need to seek help from family/friends and hopefully native English speakers. Family/friends are to confirm the authenticity of your voice and determine if you did a good job portraiting yourself through the essays. Native English speakers are to correct for grammar and offer feedback on essay content as an outsider.

gabriel198411

consultant一般只是列提纲，让你写 然后帮你一起反复修改

和中国的中介不一样，我蛮喜欢这样的

gabriel198411

•        Growing up in China - and a taste to the medical industry, work and then study.
•        Relocating to the U.S. to Broaden my Horizons - the PhD, teaching, exploring a multicultural world, and developing my expertise in biotech science
•        Personal growth through teaching in the U.S.
•        The XXXX MBA - a chance to leap forward in my career, meet challenging people. and build my networks for the future.
•        Rotational Leadership Program - learning the business leadership side of industry
•        Returning to China to run a pharmaceutical company - taking on our biggest health challenges in order to help all Chinese grow


比如这样的提纲....

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lindalibinbin 发表于 2013-9-19 23:58
Even if you don't rely on consultant, you still need to seek help from family/friends and hopefully  ...

yep. that's for sure.

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gabriel198411 发表于 2013-9-20 00:13
•        Growing up in China - and a taste to the medical industry, work and then study.
•        Relocating to  ...

这个看起来确实清晰明了 不过他们有没有给你那种很general的建议呢？比如AO想看到什么样子的essay？关于职业规划和why MBA这些日常问题他们给你insight了么？^^我觉得要是仅仅只针对某一个学校改写essay的话 性价比似乎微低哇 毕竟请他们还挺贵的 嘿嘿 这些是我个人感觉哈