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skyisblue_li

Some people hold the opinion that games are not as important for adults as they are for children. However, in my point of view, I firmly maintain that games are also important for adults. Because games make them escape from extreme tension and laborious workload, temper one's willpower, and develop teamwork spirits.

At first, games can make adults escape from excessive nervousness and strenuous workload. When adults have been concentrating on dealing with matters or writing work programs for a long while, their mental is extremely nervous and physical strength is completely consumed. In this kind of condition, they can not continue to work efficiently. With playing some games, they can make their state of mind regulated and recover from the exhausted condition. Then they carry on working again.

Furthermore, games are important to develop adults’ teamwork spirits. Many adults have no idea to cooperate or communicate with any other person. But in games, they find that without other members of their teamwork, they can not do anything. And then they would take these teamwork spirits into work and attain greater achievements and acquire more personal satisfaction.

However, people who hold the opinion that games are only important to children not adults think that only childish persons play games. In fact, these games are developed by adults! Generally, considering that games make adults escape from extreme tension and laborious workload and develop teamwork spirits, I can safely say that games are as important for adults as they are for children.

snow_mountain

以下是引用skyisblue_li在2005-1-5 23:40:00的发言：

Some people hold the opinion that games are not as important for adults as they are for children. However, in my point of view, I firmly maintain that games are also important for adults. Because games make them escape from extreme tension and laborious workload, temper one's willpower, and develop teamwork spirits.

At first, games can make adults escape from excessive nervousness and strenuous workload. When adults have been concentrating on dealing with matters or writing work programs for a long while, their mental is extremely nervous and physical strength is completely consumed. In this kind of condition, they can not continue to work efficiently. With playing some games, they can make their state of mind regulated and recover from the exhausted condition. Then they carry on working again.

Furthermore, games are important to develop adults’ teamwork spirits. Many adults have no idea to cooperate or communicate with any other person. But in games, they find that without other members of their teamwork, they can not do anything. And then they would take these teamwork spirits into work and attain greater achievements and acquire more personal satisfaction.

However, people who hold the opinion that games are only important to children not adults think that only childish persons play games. In fact, these games are developed by adults! Generally, considering that games make adults escape from extreme tension and laborious workload and develop teamwork spirits, I can safely say that games are as important for adults as they are for children.

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