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wanggang0411

薄荷妹纸 发表于 2013-9-8 11:16
97 TPO2 综合

The lecture is mainly talking about that having a team of people is definitely not the ...

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wanggang0411 发表于 2013-9-8 23:43
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谢谢批改..~~ 刚开始写 还不回套模板..还不知道应该包含听力什么内容..

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95综合写作

TPO5

The reading is talking about three explanations which trying to determine the utility of the great houses found in New Mexico. However, the lecture is mainly jeopardizing the statements made in the reading by setting lots of convincing evidences.

First, the inside of the large houses indicate they cannot house hundreds of people. Because the number of fire place found inside the house, only around ten, definitely cannot meet the needs of hundreds of people. So even though it looks like the apartment buildings, it was not residential.

Second, the excavation of these buildings indicates the large houses cannot be used to store food. There are no large containers found there during the excavation, so there had no container to contain any crops. For this reason, the houses were mainly for storage which offered in the reading passage is probably wrong.

Finally, the broken pots found near the large houses is no the whole picture. There are lots of other things found near the buildings, not just pots, and the pots may be just the regular trashes which throw away after meals. This view in the lecture disagree what stated in the reading that the great houses were used for special ceremonies.

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910 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement  
It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise.  
講到休閒活動的話，你覺得"運動"會比"看電影"或"看書"更好嗎?  

It is worldly acknowledged that the pressure people suffered recently is much higher than ever. At same time, the issue that whether it is better to relax by watching a whole movie or reading a book than by doing physical exercise, indeed, controversial. The viewpoints vary from person to person. However, in my opinion, I think doing exercise is much better for several reasons.

Admittedly, relaxing through static activities, like reading a book or watching a movie, has its advantage. For example, individuals can just sit here to release their pressure.

However, relax by doing exercise has its incomparable advantages. First, doing exercise can completely release pressure while reading or watching movie can not. What can reading or watching movies does is just help regulate the emotions. There is one of my best friends named Abide who suffers severe stress from work, and at those days, she even did not want to eat any thing. Watching movie was a wonderful chose for her at that time but it did not work. Once by chance, she played tennis in the gym class and after that she surprisingly became much better. So it is obviously that doing exercise can release the pressure completely and than just sitting there watching movie or reading.


Moreover, doing exercise also does good to people’s health while release pressure. Doing exercise can not only helps us improve our immunity but also helps us release negative emotions during the daily life. It is really a bonus comparing with static activities. We all know that individuals put fully concentration on their works, have less time and are less interested in taking exercise. This phenomena leads to the poor physical conditions of individuals and let them suffer much more pressure. Doing exercise is the most wonderful way to solve this problem.


In sum, from what has been discussed above, relax by doing exercise have much more advantages than reading or watching movie. So it is definitely better.