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写作小分队第七期已结束!占座请前往第八期大本营!

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551#
发表于 2013-10-16 11:44:29 | 只看该作者
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发表于 2013-10-16 14:27:06 | 只看该作者
15号作业,已写完,在作文贴中,

10.16号独立占座~~~
553#
发表于 2013-10-16 14:30:15 | 只看该作者
yagiliang 发表于 2013-10-15 20:50
谢谢队长!

麻烦你作文贴在哪里,我木有找到啊~
554#
发表于 2013-10-16 17:18:55 | 只看该作者
10.16 独立占座~
555#
发表于 2013-10-16 18:24:39 | 只看该作者
krystalgo 发表于 2013-10-16 14:30
麻烦你作文贴在哪里,我木有找到啊~

在我的作文贴了,谢谢http://forum.chasedream.com/foru ... ;page=2#pid18871783
556#
发表于 2013-10-16 19:47:39 | 只看该作者

10.16 独立 占座

10.16 独立 占座

should the government support artists or shouldthe artists support themselves?
During the past time, government officesare always debating about whether the government should aid artists for theircreature work. Since President Washington has continued to support artists, arthistory booms fast for a long period. Even some artists complain that governmentlimited their ability of images, most of benefiters are reluctant to admit thatgovernment should support artists.
First, unlike the common workers, artistsneed a long time to wait for themselves to improve their skills. In other words,the most famous painters are always accepted by the public after the artistsdead. While we always know that the artists respect by the later generationlive poor and even cannot support their painting materials during their lifetime. For example, Van Gogh, the most loved artists, aid by his brother and wasalways worried about his lives, a deep worry    caused him die at a very young age. Van Gogh leavedover us the most valuable painters and enlightened millions of thousands of artlovers. In order to protect the artist and support them to catch their genius, governmentshould support artists to establish some special funds to help them to success theirdream.
Second, like the other jobs, art works alsosupport employment. The government intents to enlarge work ranges to avoidjobless become too high. In china, for instance, more and more people who arebecoming older are retiring, increasing a complex problem that the government haveto solve this problem. The fund for artists can help the old people to enjoytheir productive life and enlarge their values. In my community, old women danceand paint every day after diner. Local government also organizes some activitiesto exhibit good paintings and establish some groups to gather together. The older‘slife is becoming better and government enlarged employment target.
In conclusion, I really believe thatgovernment should support the artists to protect famous artist and to enlargethe national employment. Those funds help not only the artists and thegovernment.
557#
发表于 2013-10-16 19:53:44 | 只看该作者
占了是这个意思吗
558#
发表于 2013-10-16 21:00:30 | 只看该作者
先占个独立的小座。。。10.16

辛苦修改的同学了

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 楼主| 发表于 2013-10-16 22:57:44 | 只看该作者
michelle0324 发表于 2013-10-16 19:53
占了是这个意思吗

占座形式看你LSSS 天空的颜色,麻烦先读一下小分队的规定吧,你要占综合还是独立啊,给你分到独立吧,综合写了也没人改,因为没有别人占综合的座位了,下次麻烦写清楚占哪天占综合还是独立还是都占
560#
 楼主| 发表于 2013-10-16 22:58:53 | 只看该作者
coffa 发表于 2013-10-16 19:47
10.16 独立 占座

should the government support artists or shouldthe artists support themselves? Duri ...

这里只是占座,作文需要自己开贴,具体内容形式麻烦看一下1L小分队的规定
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