请问各位大哥大姐（南瓜姐姐)这个问题!!

lea0832

这里有道题是这样的 15.what 's your neighbor look like???  can i write like this.



    Some people think their neighbor should have
good appaearance. however, other people think their neighbors should
have goodpersonality , respossibility  and society. It is a
controversial issue that whether choose the former  or the later
one . Depending on your own experience , personality type and emotional
concern. the choice , nevethless ,  is not easy to make.However,
from my point of view, i will agree that later one is more
reasonable.my augment are listed as follow.





    然后我后面3段就写good personality , respossiblility and society.  后面再婉转的说前面的那个也有好处.最后一段就总结,这样可以吗???

hncsxj

good personality 包括了responsibility. society,不知说的什么意思？你是想说比较爱和人交往吧？

又，你这样有6段了，怕写不完。我写两段，就写让步段，再总结。新年快乐：）