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1 Aug「Today」
Independent Writing：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
We can learn about one person from books and movies that the person likes.

As the world enters the era of information, we have easy access to various media, such as books and movies. As is known to us, to some extent, people may be crazy about some books or movies that do not fit with their nature. Yet does it mean we have difficulty understanding others through books and movies? Perhaps not; person's career as well as character can be learnt about through the books and movies he/she likes.

To the very basic first, it is easy to judge one person's career. In this increasing competitive society, employees are under huge pressure coming from work. In order to make a living, they have no choice but to keep their expertise up-to-date in avenue of reading books linked with their jobs. This point may be a little abstract, let me raise a convincing example. My close friend Frank, a marketing manager in an international company, is keen on reading Marketing books to accumulate professional knowledge, including how to make  commercial advertising, how to attract potential costumers, and how to build solid relationship with consumers. Apparently, the books he likes expose his career. Thus, we can make a judgement on people's job.

Also noteworthy is that books and movies can reflect human's character. It is widely accepted that human have the inclination to choose books and movies which are fit with their character. Hardly can we imagine that an open-minded boy would like to appreciate romance poetry and that an introversive girl would have a carving for war theme film. A recent survey conducted by Boston University indicates that the majority of people tend to choose books or movies which can reflect their character, therefore equipping us with a tool to analyze others' character.

To sum up, books and movies make it possible for us to have a good understanding of other people’s characteristics, including the job they do and their character.

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junanita 发表于 2013-8-1 20:43
It is widely accepted that artists do not contribute directly to economic growth of our society (th ...

我也是不会写呀。摸着石头过河，相互学习哈。

lijinglol

As the world enters the era of information, we have (had) easy（easier） access to various media, such as books and movies. As is known to us, to some extent, people may be crazy about some books or movies that do not fit with their nature. Yet does it mean we have difficulty understanding others through books and movies? Perhaps not; person's career as well as character can be learnt about through the books and movies he/she(he or she请不要用简写) likes.

To the very basic first, it is easy to judge one person's career（只有结论缺少前提）. In this increasing（increasingly） competitive society, employees are under huge pressure coming（derived） from work. In order to make a living, they have no choice but to keep their expertise up-to-date in avenue of reading books linked with their jobs. This point may be a little abstract, let me raise a convincing example. My close friend Frank, a marketing manager in an international company, is keen on reading Marketing books to accumulate professional knowledge, including how to make  commercial advertising, how to attract potential costumers, and how to build solid relationship with consumers. Apparently, the books he likes expose his career. Thus, we can make a judgement on people's job.

Also noteworthy is that books and movies can reflect human's character. It is widely accepted that human have the inclination to choose books and movies which are fit with their character(和首段的让步好像语义冲突，如果前面用fit with的话后面可以换成echo/resonate to). Hardly can we imagine that an open-minded boy would like to appreciate romance poetry and that an introversive girl would have a carving for war theme film. A recent survey conducted by Boston University indicates that the majority of people tend to choose books or movies which can reflect their character, therefore equipping us with a tool to analyze others' character.

To sum up, books and movies make it possible for us to have a good understanding of other people’s characteristics, including the job they do and their character.(我也有不太会写结尾><不过理论上来说，这个对主体段的总结偏短，应适当加入升华)

很不错的赶脚啊！思路很清晰~优秀句式很多~~我向你学习~~

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2 Aug「Today」
Independent Writing：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Compared with the people living in cities, the people living in villages and farm areas are more satisfied with their lives.

Have you ever enjoyed the wonderful scene in a quiet village? Have you ever breathe the fresh air in a farm? If not, you will never know the cozy life of villagers and farmers. However, does it mean that people who setting in rural areas are more satisfied with their lives than those who inhabiting in urban area? I would say no, just the opposite, people living in cities can achieve the sense of satisfaction with more ease owing to advances in medical technology and in educational system.

To the very basic first, the cutting-edge medical technology makes it possible for city dwellers to maintain fitness, which is an indispensable part of a content life. Due to economic development, medical equipment and emergency services in cities are in higher quality than that in villages, thus equipping city dwellers with an immediate access to keep healthy. In order to see this point clearly, let me quote an example. Last year, my sister, living in downtown, hurt her ankle by accident, the doctor treated her with advanced equipment. The doctor took photos of the wound to exclude potential severe damages. After ensuring the safety of her bone, the doctor dealt with the injury in standards process. With a careful treatment, she recovered several days later. However, it is impossible for a village hospital to operate in this way due to the lack of technology and skills. Thus, fitness will be better taken care of in cities, laying the solid foundation of pursuing happiness.

In addition to offering state-the-art medical care, city life also enhances citizen's opportunities to receive high-quality education, putting them in a favorable position in future life. It is widely accepted that the education resources distribute unevenly between cities and villages and that the quality of rural education far outweighs its counterpart. For instance, a student living in city has the chance to read a myriad of books in a comprehensive library, further his study in a well-know college, and turn to educational experts for help in trouble in academic work. In sharp contrast to all the advances in city, a chlid who live in a farm has difficulty completing his education in high school, not to mention to specialize in one field in a university. According to a latest survey conducted by Boston University, the number of people who receive higher schooling is much larger in city than in countryside. The researcher, in the survey, also points out that due to education background, the urban people are more like to feel satisfied with their life.  

Admittedly, there is little doubt that the environment problems, such as air pollution, noise, are more serious in city. This is because, in order to make a living, the majority of manufactures in city discharge numerous sewage into the river, chop off a myriad of forests, and consume a large amount of fossil fuel, which put a heavy strain on the nature. However, it is clear to me that, along with the rapidly technology development, environmental degradation will be gradually settled down. Therefore, in the future, urban people are capable of appreciating the nature beauty and enjoying their life.

All in all, although the city life has some minor drawbacks, yet it offer much more merits. It is easier for city residents to obtain the sense of satisfaction not only because they are able to enjoy the up-to-date medical technology, but also because they have an easy access to high education.

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lijinglol 发表于 2013-8-2 08:12
As the world enters the era of information, we have (had) easy（easier） access to various media, su ...

这么早就就修订好了，多谢多谢，建议狠不错，我再自己完善一下。

lijinglol

Have you ever enjoyed the wonderful scene(s) in a quiet village? Have you ever breathe the fresh air in a farm? If not, you will never know the cozy life of villagers and farmers. However, does it mean that people who setting(who set或者直接setting) in rural areas are more satisfied with their lives than those who inhabiting(同上) in urban area? I would say no, just the opposite, people living in cities can achieve the sense of satisfaction with more ease owing to advances in medical technology and in educational system.
(你真的很喜欢用诱敌深入的开头呀XD~)

To the very basic first, the cutting-edge medical technology makes it possible for city dwellers to maintain fitness, which is an indispensable part of a content life. Due to economic development, medical equipment and emergency services in cities are in higher quality than that(those) in villages, thus equipping city dwellers with an immediate access to keep healthy. In order to see this point clearly, let me quote an example. Last year, my sister, living in downtown(who's living in downtown area/who's living downtown), hurt her ankle by accident, (and/另起一句)the doctor treated her with advanced equipment. The doctor took photos(a MRI/X-ray) of the wound to exclude potential severe damages. After ensuring the safety of her bone, the doctor dealt with the injury in standards(standard) process. With a careful treatment, she recovered several days later. However, it is impossible for a village hospital to operate in this way due to the lack of technology and skills. Thus, fitness will be better taken care of in cities, laying the solid foundation of pursuing happiness.【fitness(patients) will be better taken care of in cities, laying(which代前面整句 lays) the solid foundation of pursuing happiness.
/ fitness will be better taken care of( fully ensured) in cities, laying the solid foundation of pursuing happiness.】

In addition to offering state-the-art medical care, city life also enhances citizen's opportunities to receive high-quality education, putting them in a favorable position in future life. It is widely accepted that the education resources distribute(are distributed) unevenly between cities and villages and that the quality of rural education far outweighs its counterpart. For instance, a student living in city has the chance to read a myriad of books in a comprehensive library, further his study in a well-know college, and turn to educational（professional） experts for help in trouble in academic work. In sharp contrast to all the advances in city, a chlid who live（s） in a farm has difficulty completing his education in high school, not to mention to specialize in one field in a university. According to a latest survey conducted by Boston University, the number of people who receive higher schooling is much larger in city than (that)in countryside. The researcher, in the survey, also points out that due to (the averagely higher)education background, the urban people are more like(ly) to feel satisfied with their life.  

Admittedly, there is little doubt that the environment problems, such as air pollution,(and) noise, are more serious in city. This is because, in order to make a living, the majority of manufactures in city discharge numerous sewage into the river, chop off a myriad of forests, and consume a large amount of fossil fuel, which put a heavy strain on the nature. However, it is clear to me that, along with the rapidly(rapid) technology development, environmental degradation will be gradually settled down. Therefore, in the future, urban people are capable of appreciating the nature beauty(the beauty of nature) and enjoying their life.

All in all, although the city life has some minor drawbacks, yet(删去) it offer（s） much more merits. It is easier for city residents to obtain the sense of satisfaction not only because they are able to enjoy the up-to-date medical technology, but also because they have an easy access to high education.

一边看主体段一边感动得哭啊……细节炒鸡到位，每次三连击都让我清血槽啊！
床床是我的榜样！可惜今天有事写不了作文没法和你互攻……