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发表于 2013-7-16 23:20:43 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
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题目 It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specilize in one specific subject

As we moved into a society that competing becomes an increasingly intense in school, in workplace, even in our daily life. The topic of should we enhance our knowlege or specilize in certain field came to our sight and lead to heated discussion. As far as I am concerned, I think broad our information in every field is much better.

Admittedly, specialize in one subject seems more useful to our future career. Since it make us know a course deeply. Take accounting as a example, someone takes four years in college to finish the whole accounting class, while others take a year or even less to roughly be familiar with the course. Comaparing those two group, the former one definitely have wide knowledge of accounting since they study step by step. Students major in accounting must have all kinds of seletive and compulsory courses like Management and Audit before they got the degree. However, the latter group  in the one -year-education may only study limited courses which are superficial. In addition, the time people know deeply about certain field, they are more confident than those who are not professional. Considering the advantages of broading knowledge, we also have many to say.

First of all, in our daily life, multiple knowledges help individuals live easier. When your bicycle breaks down, you can fix it without the aid of others if you learn the knowledge of bike; When your mother has trouble with computer, you can solve the bug without professors' instruction if you once read a book named Details of Computer; When your friend can work our one statistics problem, you can do her a favor and find out the way to solve it if you major in Statistics in college. So hasknowedge in every field provides you a variety opportunities to help others in advance.

What's more, you gain a sea of happiness the time you study a lot of things. Studying is a funny process since you can improve your interior quality. I clearly remembered when I was 13 years old, I attended a majority class including English, mathematics, and biology. Those three course is fresh to me at that age, I was satisfied every time I took a class and learnt a novel point.  As I grew older, I also have a great impression when I took six class like physical and Chemistry. I was excited when I put two transparent liquid together and got a red one at the condition of heat. Those thing gave me a lot of fun in my life.

Above all, I prefer the choice of have broad knowledge.

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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-16 23:28:12 | 只看该作者
TPO11 独立作文

题目 some people say that Internet Provides people with a lot of valuable information.Others think that assess to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?

Nowadays, computers become an inevitable tools in our daily life. It brings us so much convenience but also take harmful influence in some cases. Facing the advantages and shortcomings, people should stand on which side? It arises heated discussion. As for me, I approve the opoinion that computer is useful for our lilfe.

First of all, taking our study as a example, when we facing the depth-knowledge in major subject, We can have a easy access to Internet to search for information only by clicking on the mouse. And all kinds of information related to the key words you press on the keyboard spring on the screen. In the past, while computers were not common in schools or families, you must go to the library and face thousands of books to aim at your need. Therefore,it
is definitely convenient for people when they need some materials. And Those materials which Internet provided is highly similar to your to topic.

What's more, taking our life as a example, when our family is going to visit one city where we are not familiar with for a cvacation, surfing on the Internet is a efficient way to know the culture, the habbitat, the diet,and the weather of that city. In 2008 summer break, my family planed a journey to WU Han which is the hotest city in China. It took me 2 days to stay in my bedroom and sunk in the Baidu,one of a famous and biggest searching in China, to find  practical messages when living in WuHan. And I was proun of myself that I made a schedule which gain the praise of my parents. Because through Internet,learn about somewhere that net friends suggested we must to visit, somplaces that did not worth to step on, certain food named ReGanMian that is famous in Wuhan and so on. In addition, Internet brings us a lot of entertainment when we really need to relax ourself. When I am tired in doing homework, I usually prefer to look through some tourist webset, like Tourists. I am a girl who have great passion to travel. However, because of the shortage of money, I actuall do not visit beyond China boundry. In Tourits, I can have a view on scenery all over the world which bring me satisfaction.

Admittedly, some arm news may appear in the computer screen and these news can influence one people's behavior. Considering to the benefit Internet take to us, those flaws can be ingored.

Above all, I hold the view that Internet provide us lots of information in all aspects. And It has a positive influence on our life.
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-17 19:18:27 | 只看该作者
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