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[注意] 偶21号以身试法,GWD 9-3一道语法题终于可以定论!

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11#
发表于 2004-12-23 23:25:00 | 只看该作者



buddy, 这里有个国情问题,老美可以一眼看出这个转折关系,而国人看不出。具体可以参考Stoneren的解释:



While the cost of wireless service has plummeted in the last year and mobile phones are increasingly common, many people are now using their mobile phones to make calls across a wide region at night and on weekends, when numerous wireless companies provide unlimited airtime for a relatively small monthly fee.


句子表达的是:虽然无线电话服务费在过去的一年中下降,而且同时,手机变得越来越普遍,但是还是有很多人仅仅在外地、晚上或周末才使用手机,虽然手机的服务公司提供了时间无限制的服务。


在这里,补充一个常识,在美国,很多无线电话公司提供保月制,比如:一个月$40,可以无限制通话。从逻辑上讲,这种服务的推出应该导致在一天内任何时间,一个手机用户可以随时随地地使用手机,但是,原文未划线部分说明,这种服务没有导致大家随意地使用手机。

所以,本题转折的味道还是挺浓的说。




To rhod & Stoneren:


原句并没有only,如果是转折,则必有only才通顺。

12#
发表于 2004-12-24 20:22:00 | 只看该作者

buddy, 这个还是要从意思上来理解.

"在外地、晚上或周末才使用手机" 和 "服务公司提供了时间无限制的服务"从意思上看就是一个转折关系,不需要用only. 如果用了only, 只不过是让这个转折关系更明显。

如果你说While表转折,While在书面语不能表转折。表转折需要用Whereas。

根据longman的解释,没有明确说明while在书面语不能表转折,一定要用whereas。

3. used to emphasize the difference between two situations, activities etc
- Schools in the north tend to be better equipped, while those in the south are relatively poor.

根据我的经验,应该也没有这一个限制,烦请提供出处。



13#
发表于 2004-12-24 21:13:00 | 只看该作者

I CHOOSE E.

D用plummeting 是不是不太好?

14#
发表于 2004-12-24 21:17:00 | 只看该作者
选E的原因能否这样说,many people做主语,with做状语修饰不当
15#
发表于 2004-12-25 13:40:00 | 只看该作者

不知道,我能不能参与NN们的讨论!其实不管WHILE能不能在FORMAL/ACDEMIC ENGILISH中表转折!这题E都是错的!


因为不管WHILE是表示“当````的时候”或表转折时,E都从一定程度上改变了原句子的含义!并没有遵循GMAT语法改错的一个原则:尽量遵循原句子的本来含义!如果说为了改正语法错误,而修该了原句的含义的话,GMAT还用出语法改错吗?我们自己重新写一个句子都不一定比他的差!所以,一定要尽量遵循原句子的含义!


而D则真正遵循了这一原则!所以虽然D和E在语法上都是正确的,但由于,E的这个LOGICAL错误,这题只能选D


[此贴子已经被作者于2004-12-25 13:42:00编辑过]
16#
发表于 2004-12-25 13:48:00 | 只看该作者

另外我还想说,有人说有美国人说WHILE表转折就对!我想说的是,这个人可能ENGLISH比中国人好很多!但他并不一定就了解GMAT!

我们为什么考GMAT,ETS为什么出GMAT给那么多想进B-SCHOOL的人考试呢?

GMAT说穿了是测试一个人的LOGIAL ANALYSIS ABILITY和MATH ANALYSIS ABILITY的一种测试,它并不是单纯的像TOEFL或IELTS一样的一种语言水平的测试!这就是为什么,有很多人英语过了专8都不一定能考好GMAT的原因!

不要单纯地从英语语法的角度去做题!

17#
发表于 2004-12-26 01:10:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用buddyk在2004-12-23 23:25:00的发言:



buddy, 这里有个国情问题,老美可以一眼看出这个转折关系,而国人看不出。具体可以参考Stoneren的解释:



While the cost of wireless service has plummeted in the last year and mobile phones are increasingly common, many people are now using their mobile phones to make calls across a wide region at night and on weekends, when numerous wireless companies provide unlimited airtime for a relatively small monthly fee.



句子表达的是:虽然无线电话服务费在过去的一年中下降,而且同时,手机变得越来越普遍,但是还是有很多人仅仅在外地、晚上或周末才使用手机,虽然手机的服务公司提供了时间无限制的服务。


在这里,补充一个常识,在美国,很多无线电话公司提供保月制,比如:一个月$40,可以无限制通话。从逻辑上讲,这种服务的推出应该导致在一天内任何时间,一个手机用户可以随时随地地使用手机,但是,原文未划线部分说明,这种服务没有导致大家随意地使用手机。


我补充一点:美国无线电话公司提供服务是一个手机用户可以随便地使用手机在晚上或周末。(unlimited night and weekend minutes for 5 largest national wireless carriers). so the when is used to describe night and weekend.



所以,本题转折的味道还是挺浓的说。


所以,本题无转折。




To rhod & Stoneren:


原句并没有only,如果是转折,则必有only才通顺。



18#
发表于 2004-12-26 02:21:00 | 只看该作者
D is my choice. The reasons are as following:
1, There is an important principle of SC in GMAT: DO NOT CHANGE THEMEANING OF THE ORIGINAL SENTENCE. We can get a clear clue, which theunderline part expresses reasons,  from the original sentence. Echanges the meaning because it contrasts the meaning of main clasuse. Dkeeps the original meaning.
2, Generally to say, When "while" introduces a clause to express acontrastive meaning to main clause, the sentence structures of bothmain clause and subordinative clause should be similar.
3, In E, present perfect is not suitable in here. If the adverb pharse"in the last year" changed to "in the last ten year", present perfectwould be suitable. This is very subtle to non-English speaker.

By the way, Some XDJMs try to get help from foreigners. I encourge youto do so because they usually have a better sense in English than youdo. But you never consider their opinions superstition. Were theyalways right, most of native speakers would get a full mark of verbalin GMAT.
19#
发表于 2004-12-26 02:38:00 | 只看该作者
D is my choice. The reasons are as following:
1, There is an important principle of SC in GMAT: DO NOT CHANGE THEMEANING OF THE ORIGINAL SENTENCE. We can get a clear clue, which theunderline part expresses reasons,  from the original sentence. Echanges the meaning because it contrasts the meaning of main clasuse. Dkeeps the original meaning.
2, Generally to say, When "while" introduces a clause to express acontrastive meaning to main clause, the sentence structures of bothmain clause and subordinative clause should be similar.
3, In E, present perfect is not suitable in here. If the adverb pharse"in the last year" changed to "in the last ten year", present perfectwould be suitable. This is very subtle to non-English speaker.

By the way, Some XDJMs try to get help from foreigners. I encourge youto do so because they usually have a better sense in English than youdo. But you never consider their opinions superstition. Were theyalways right, most of native speakers would get a full mark of verbalin GMAT.
20#
发表于 2004-12-26 03:29:00 | 只看该作者

我觉得:

美国有的plan是周末和晚上9:00 后才免费, 所以这题里没有表转折,而是因为.

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