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shakawoosh

TOPIC: You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice

Where will you put your money for, a house or a business? If I have enough money, I would like to purchase a house rather than investing into a business.  A business could be failed; however, a house is an essential accommodation for a human being.

The first reason to buy a house is that the house offers me a better environment to live.  I gain preciously personal space to feel free, not bother or get bothered.  I could get relaxed by putting some music on after work by not worrying if the others are sleeping. Without other people’s touching, I could find my stuff easily by placing them in an organized order.

The second reason to buy a house is that allows me to have a more socialized life. I will be able to hold more activities in my house, such as reunion with my families, house party with my friends, BBQ with my colleagues. People will get know me more by visiting my house. We could share our joys together.

The third reason to buy a house is that the house strengthens my financial situation. The house could be a potential option to get a loan from a bank. Once I fully purchase a house, the house is my asset. I could use my asset to guarantee a mortgage from a bank to start my business.

Purchasing a house has a lot of advantages. It’s a fatal place for people to eat, sleep and relax. Furthermore, it’s critically perfect place to share the happiness with people. The last but not the least, a house opens an opportunity to a business. If I have enough money, I would purchase a house firstly.