陶瓷邮件范本

benxu

陶瓷的关键是提供有趣而且相关的细节来hook教授。以下范式从网上获得。供小本学弟学妹参考。

阅读之前请注意：
1. 材料没有准备好不要套
2. 对象没有准备好不要套
3. 时机没有准备好不要套

Dear Professor XXX,This is XX, a student at XXX College with a major in xxx.  I am a [junior] and will be graduating next May with a [4.3 GPA] and experience in our college’s [summer program in xxx/internship program in xxx/Honors College/etc.]. I am planning to apply to your program in xxx.In one of my classes, “xxx,” which was taught by Professor XXX, I had the chance to read your article, “xxxx.”  I really enjoyed it, and it gave me many ideas for my future research.  I have been exploring graduate programs where I can work on this topic.  My specific project will likely focus on xxxx, and I am particularly interested in exploring the question of xxxxx. In addition, I have participated in xxx projects with xxx. The project was awarded xxx. For more details please see my attached CV.I hope you don’t mind my getting in touch, but I’d like to inquire whether you are currently accepting graduate students.  If you are, would you willing to talk to me a bit more, by email or on the phone, or in person if I can arrange a campus visit, about my graduate school plans?  I have explored your department’s graduate school website in detail, and it seems like an excellent fit for me because of its emphasis on xx and xx,  but I still have a few specific questions about xx and xxx that I’d like to talk to you about.I know you’re very busy so I appreciate any time you can give me.  Thanks very much,Sincerely,xxx

zzmypster

写得不错，虽然觉得略长了点。
btw今年SICS ben兄还来么

benxu

我打算来的，顺便去三番尝尝传说中的羊城茶室。你暑假一直在berkeley吗？

zzmypster

benxu 发表于 2013-5-10 04:13
我打算来的，顺便去三番尝尝传说中的羊城茶室。你暑假一直在berkeley吗？什么时候来南加玩？ ...

我呆到开完会差不多就回国啦。到时候开会见~

mumiming

感谢楼主分享

Tripleg

Use this as a reference but NOT

Tripleg

Tripleg 发表于 2013-7-3 11:03
Use this as a reference but NOT

Use this as a reference but NOT a template. Your actual communication can be very different both in content and in wording. Also, it is always a good idea to keep an email concise and precise.

duanxs

如同找对象，帅哥美女就那几个，如今这么多人都想套，成功的只是缘分！

benxu

Tripleg 发表于 2013-7-3 11:07
Use this as a reference but NOT a template. Your actual communication can be very different both i ...

Could not agree more.

benxu

duanxs 发表于 2013-7-4 01:37
如同找对象，帅哥美女就那几个，如今这么多人都想套，成功的只是缘分！

没错。
但套不一定成功。不套机会更少啊。是吧