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[作文互改] issue41...求拍。。。

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发表于 2013-4-18 10:30:21 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
41. The greatness of individuals can bedecided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries.
Write a response in which you discuss theextent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain yourreasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting yourposition, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might nothold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author asserts that only people livingafter the individuals, not their contemporaries can decide the greatness ofthem. I agree that the greatness of some people can only be determined bypeople living after them due to their pioneering ideas. Yet this argumentshould be based on case-by-case analysis whether they can be decided by theircontemporaries or not.
I agree that great people are only able tobe determined by people living later days due to the unique ideas of thesegreat individuals. Sometimes individuals got some opinions so special thatpeople rounding them cannot understand them because they were confined by sometenets or traditional ideas which has been broken by those individuals. Forexample, Van Gogh, one of the  greatestartists in the world, however were not acknowledged of his capability ofpainting before his deadness. The meanings of his paintings were so strangewhich were even contradictory to conventional aesthetic knowledge that thesepaintings are given up by people. Nevertheless, as the society develops,  the society are more and more open to variousopinions, people found and determined the value of aesthetic in his works ofart.  So individuals' talents are onlydecided through people with different perspectives living after them.
Yet a problem with the statement is thatthe author ignores that the modern society is developing so fast  that the speed of the transmission of newsand information  become so fast thatalmost everyone will instantly know about events taken place several days ago,which contribute to the comprehension of the greatness of people. For example,Steve Jobs combined aesthetic ideas and information technology into hisproducts, which is quite different from IT products before and got rid of thelimitations of former ideas. So lots of doubt cast on his ideas. Fortunately,due to the speed of information, people all over the world focus theirattention on them and more and more people think it a breakthrough andinnovation in IT products and realized the excellence of Steve Jobs. Inaddition, the work of many great people are designed to satisfy the demand ofcontemporaries, so contemporaries can immediately know about the benefits ofthem and determine the greatness of individuals. 有时间可补充
Insum, I agree that the greatness of individuals with unique ideas canonly be determined by people living after them. But these phenomenon may mostlytake place in the past due to the transmission of information in the modernsociety. And most individuals are working to achieve the demand of the publicresulting in that people will recognize the values of their work includingthese individuals themselves.
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沙发
发表于 2013-4-18 10:44:29 | 只看该作者
LZ有心加入互改组没?
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2013-4-18 10:56:40 | 只看该作者
竹林中人 发表于 2013-4-18 10:44
LZ有心加入互改组没?

额,,暂时不加啦。。因为没几天就要考了。。估计来不及撒。。。谢谢楼主。。辛苦^_^
地板
发表于 2013-4-19 16:54:52 | 只看该作者


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