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马上就要考试了，作文还是很烂。这次自己很认真的写了一遍也修改过，请大家再帮着好好改改，多提宝贵意见。我还需要做那些准备工作啊？

This is a controversial issue about if we should pay attention to celebrity’s opinion. Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern. We may find some people think these famous people’s opinions are better than those of ordinary people; meanwhile, other people prefer listening experts’ opinion rather than these famous people’s opinions. The choice, nevertheless, it's not easy to make. However, in my point of view, it's more advisable to choose the later one. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

The main reason for my propensity is that some famous people, such as actors, athletes and rock stars, may have no high educations. A rock star may know a lot about music, but should she understand politics better than you? An actor who is famous for his performance maybe just graduate from a high school. An athlete has to spend so much time on his training that he has no time learn about social issues. So I don’t think these celebrity’s opinions will be better than other people’s. It’s definitely better to discuss issues with people you really know than to listen to the people who are just famous. Even though there are many different views concerning this topic, in my part, I don’t suggest listening to famous people.

Another reason can be seen by everyone is that every so often some famous people give an opinion for economic reasons. So their opinions do not represent these people’s real thinking. Today, some companies realize that so many young people would like to pay attention to these famous people, so they just make use of it to make some ads. What’s more, some famous people won’t be responsible to their opinions. Therefore it maybe dangerous to listen their opinions.

Last but not least, if we are going to listen to other people’s opinions, we had better listen to the experts. Maybe you disagree with them, but their opinions are worth listening to. Fame of some well-know people doesn’t necessarily mean knowledge and experience as well as we expect.

There are still many other reasons that can account for my fondness, but the obvious one has been presented as above. We admire famous people for their achievements in their fields. This doesn’t mean that we should listen to their opinions about everything. So I strongly commit to the notion that we should not pay attention to the famous people when they give some opinions.