gwd 8-15 请版主指教

mahyar

8-15

Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.


A. Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

B. Clouds form by the Sun’s warmth evaporating the water in the oceans, which rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust.

C. Warmed by the Sun, ocean water evaporates, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form clouds.

D. The water in the oceans evaporates, warmed by the Sun, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust, which forms clouds.

E. Ocean water, warmed by the Sun, evaporates and rises high into the atmosphere, which then condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form as clouds.

答案给的是c, 但是我觉得A最合适，因为从逻辑上讲其他几个都是water rise into the atmosephere, 不符合逻辑，只有evaperation rise into atmosphere 才合适，请版主指教

mahyar

对不起，刚看了一下A 有致命的语法错误 clouds condensing, 但是C的逻辑错误怎么解释呢

littlemuddie

偶选C. 因为warmed和ocean water逻辑没错。

ocean water evaporates, rises......, and condenses.........三个连冠动作 to form clouds. 清晰明了。

1）而A, clouds are formed 首先不好。

2）water that is warm又犯GMAT大忌。

3）另condensing 在此只能理解为伴随，但condensing 的动作发出者应该是 ocean water 而非clouds，此为三错。

4）应用ocean water 足够了， 无须 oceans' water.  

综上所述，A 坚决批判。请见谅

whoami2

以下是引用mahyar在2004-12-10 6:57:00的发言：
对不起，刚看了一下A 有致命的语法错误 clouds condensing, 但是C的逻辑错误怎么解释呢

哈哈，我跟楼主掉进同一个坑里了。然后也是对答案的时候发现了 condensing的问题

还是功夫不到家啊

winnowerfly

which 不是不能指代前面句子意思的吗?

本来这题挺明白的,又糊涂起来.

jianlysmile

请教：

C答案中，主语 ocean water evaporates, 后面这个逗号有必要吗？他后面就是谓语动词rises,应该去掉逗号吧，疑惑，求助

crowkiller

以下是引用jianlysmile在2007-7-24 15:55:00的发言：

请教：

C答案中，主语 ocean water evaporates, 后面这个逗号有必要吗？他后面就是谓语动词rises,应该去掉逗号吧，疑惑，求助

有必要，主语是ocean water ， evaporate 是和后面并列的谓语。。。

JUJUCHENG

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-9-22 4:15:27编辑过]

mimixiaxia

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elinaqu

逻辑意思的顺序,动作的顺序,此题类似于 OG 261