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发表于 2009-1-13 14:56:00 | 只看该作者
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发表于 2009-8-2 09:46:00 | 只看该作者

同问

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发表于 2009-8-21 14:36:00 | 只看该作者

感觉C的to form不太好啊 因为有表目的的意思,有点改变愿意的感觉   但其他选项错得更明显 不知道这么说对不对啊?

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发表于 2009-9-18 18:48:00 | 只看该作者

对这道题还是有疑问,首先A中的condensing的主语可不可以理解为"....oceans's water that is warmed...." that引导的定语从句的主语?即condensing伴随的是(water) is warmed by the sun这句话。这样它的主语就是water了嘛。

其次,C是不是有一点句子中心转移的味道?本来是要强调clouds的形成,C却成了强调water的一系列动作。

15#
发表于 2009-12-12 02:46:17 | 只看该作者
同问A中,condensing应该修饰最近的一个完整主谓句的主语(新东方的笔记),所以condensing应该修饰oceans’ water. 难道that(oceans’ water) is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere 不算是完整主谓句?!
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发表于 2009-12-12 11:23:02 | 只看该作者
同问A中,condensing应该修饰最近的一个完整主谓句的主语(新东方的笔记),所以condensing应该修饰oceans’ water. 难道that(oceans’ water) is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere 不算是完整主谓句?!
-- by 会员 gelgoog (2009/12/12 2:46:17)



A中condensing确实是修饰ocean's water。that(oceans’ water) is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere是完整主谓句
17#
发表于 2010-9-4 13:09:10 | 只看该作者
句子强调clouds的形成过程,但A选项强调的是clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water,后面用一个that从句解释water,掩盖了clouds具体的形成过程。
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发表于 2013-7-23 12:28:50 | 只看该作者
如果把A中的condensing改为condenses,相对于C,偶认为A更加符合句子的intended meaning. open to discussion
19#
发表于 2014-8-27 03:52:21 | 只看该作者
看明白哦
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发表于 2015-7-7 05:08:49 | 只看该作者
C is the best. A has voice problem

A. Clouds are formed from the evaporation of the oceans’ water that is warmed by the Sun and rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust. Active voice & passive voice

B. Clouds form by the Sun’s warmth evaporating the water in the oceans, which rises high into the atmosphere, condensing in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust. Modifier problem

C. Warmed by the Sun, ocean water evaporates, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form clouds. The best structure.

D. The water in the oceans evaporates, warmed by the Sun, rises high into the atmosphere, and condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust, which forms clouds. Modifier problems

E. Ocean water, warmed by the Sun, evaporates and rises high into the atmosphere, which then condenses in tiny droplets on minute particles of dust to form as clouds. Modifier problem
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