作文求狠批 420 二战， 作文白痴型，求指导

mandymaki

DA or A   your job has more effect on your happinessthan your social life.

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Main point:  agree

R1 : social life虽然可以自己选择做喜欢的事情 party or clubbingrelease pressure from work to some extent  但是人际关系复杂 处理不好成为负担。本来可以 relax 最后还干扰工作。让步Compared to this aspect, job seems more easy to handle . theInstrumental tie linked all of the

R3: high salarybring more happier life after work      

It rarelysurprises me anymore that social life play a more important role on enhancingour happiness. Hordes of people, however, more often than not, tend to believethat doing what they really want to do just like those activities which thesocial life comprised will bring them enjoyment, for the simple reason that thechoice is made totally on their own, nothing compulsory .Perhaps there is anelement of truth in their argument, but I, without hesitation, still advocatethat it is the job that can really bring us thehappiness we achieved for a life time.

Opinion pollsfrom around the world by the Economist formulate surprisingly that there arenumerous people who ever since their early years have associated the job whichthey spend 8 hours per day with full of negative emotion. To their dismay, whatthey have in fact come to realize is that kind of ” boring” job will benefit usin more ways than one.

Granted sociallife does boast some merits. First we can release the pressure due to settingyourselves in a comfortable state. Second, enlarging our friend circle viasocial activities may add some color to the routine life. This idea,conversely, tends to be over-exaggerated.

First andforemost, committing to your job leads to high-efficiency work, in that youcould finish your task quickly. Despite the difficulties encountered in yourjob, this seems so simple that you just like a fatuous target- achievementmachine. That is, obviously, where you are annoying with. The long arduousprocess wipe out your fulfillment of accomplish the mission successfully inyour deep mind, where the inner part where full of the fantastic views whichteemed with the satisfaction of clubbing, watching TV or just sleeping. Whereaslet’s amplify the enhancement of your self-esteem and confidence while you arein the work time--the unnoticing smile after the meeting with your boss; themoment you get promotion; the underlying paper with a large sum of salary. Allof these are attributed to the spare time you can have a sweet vision of sociallife. You must acknowledge that the potential advent of job’s positive aspecthas already come into your life. In the other word, it is the job that steadilysustains your social life.

Besides, thehigh salary from your endeavor to the job is also contribute to your happiness,although, indirectly. At weekends, having a wonderful family party outside thetown is a wonderful daydream to some families who don’t have a large sum of income.A good job with a high salary also renders your children more possible to getthe best education in the world. For instance, some of the Chinese studentschoose to go abroad for further study in support of their family wealth. Fromthese cases, we ultimately realize the further impact on happiness comes fromjob exerting everywhere.

As a whole, theidea that social life playing a more integral role of happiness of course canbe set aside with a prey of regret, perhaps, but with no sense of permanentloss.

mandymaki

并且问下各位大神小仙。 这样的作文能得多少分啊。