twe049..各位指教帮我打个分....

Louiswt

TWE49o you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication?

There has been a controversy nowadays over the issue of whether or not it is a good way to communicate with people face-to-face. As far as I am concerned, I strongly support that face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication for at least two reasons. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.

To begin with, face-to-face communication can show your resprect to the people,and make the people trust you. Recent reseach reveal that the competition of besiness become increasingly fierce. In order to earn a contract, you have to beat millions of competitors, not only by reasonable conditions, but also by excellent impression. Face-to-face communication is the most significantway to leave a great impression to the merchants. If you communicate with them by phone or letters, that may leave the merchants a floating impression. So important is the imprssion, that make most people choose the face-to-face communication.

Next, you can observe the people’s expression through the face-to-face conversation. Lies exist in every place of the society. A letter, an e-mail or a phone call may hide a million of lies, in that you can not figure it out easily without observing the expression of people’s face. In most situations, you can know whether the people are telling truth or not from face-to-face communication. Because lying in the conversation, people would express a little unusual unconsciously,just as sweating, talking unsmoothly and so on.

However, dissenters may argue that letter and e-mail can express something, which is hard to say. But from my perspective, I still consider the face-to-face communication a good way to show your honest,no matter a love story or an apology.

In sum, taking into account above mentioned reasons, which are adequate and persuasive, the conclusion is obvious: after extremely examined all aspects of these different types of communication, face-to-face communication is better than others, not only by showing your resprect to people, but also by differentiating the lie.

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-12-12 19:08:57编辑过]

Louiswt

还是没有人帮我改改嘛？？？

Louiswt

首先我对我自己的实力持十分怀疑的态度........(极度缺乏自信,在新东方学了模板后...雅思作文考了5分)

现在还在探索TWE中.....这篇文章 我自己觉得好像短了点, 但是常规不是应该2段理由,1段让步吗?

情JJ帮忙解答一下...谢谢