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发表于 2013-3-17 23:34:29 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
In today’s fast-developing society, many people suffer from stress both from work and everyday lives. As a result, a voice has risen that people should be satisfied with what they already have .and it encourages people to lead a simple and easy life. Does that mean being dissatisfied with our current world does bad to our society and lives. In my view, it depends on different situations to decide what attitude we have towards satisfaction.

There is no denying that it is just the dissatisfaction with our current life that leads to the invention of so many techniques. These techniques really improve our lives a lot. For instance, when people are unsatisfied with the inconvenience of communication through writing letters, which is not only time-consuming but also is unsafe. To overcome this disadvantage, a scientist named Bell invented the telephone, so that people can deliver information to a certain person thousands of miles away instantly. The same is true with the invention of TV. In previous times, people cannot get to know news in time, and they are unsatisfied with this isolation with the world around them . The fantastic invention of TV now presents people with variaties of news quickly. These are all examples of unsatisfaction contributing to the technique’s development.

On the other hand, people should be satisfied with what they already have in some circumstances. We can hear from so much news that some people are put into prison because of committing crime, such as corrupting and stealing. The reason why they do these bad things is that they are unsatisfied with the amount of money they own while longing for getting more. Moreover, people today devote nearly all their time to working in pursuit of fortune and status , consequently, they do not have enough time to stay with their family members as well as enjoying the life.  Some people even struggle for money at the cost of healthy. These behavior of unsatisfaction drag the advancement of society, while having bad influence on people’s own life.

All in all , I posit that we should look at different situations to decide wether to be satisfied or not. The ultimate goal is to lead a life full of happiness , we should make great efforts to get the life we want.
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