At an orientation meeting, the travelers were told that a visa, a landing card, and evidence of inoculation against typhoid fever would be needed by each of them.
At an orientation meeting, the travelers were told that a visa, a landing card, and evidence of inoculation against typhoid fever would be needed by each of them.
A a visa, a landing card, and evidence of inoculation against typhoid fever would be needed by each of them
B they would need a visa, a landing card, and evidence of their being inoculated against typhoid fever
C they would need evidence of being inoculated against typhoid fever and a visa and landing card
D they would each need a visa, a landing card, and evidence of inoculation against typhoid fever
E they would need visas, landing cards, and evidence of inoculation against typhoid fever for each of them
我的分析 a 选项 句子主语在宾语从句中做主语,用主动语态比较好 个人觉得这个句子强调need的发出者 所以被动罗嗦。 b 选项of+being结构也wordy c 改变句意 typhoid fever and a visa and landing card 三者平行 d 和e的差别在于 1.they would each need 和 they would need 前者后面跟着的名词应该是单数,后者后面跟着的名词应该是复数 而 e中evidences没有用复数。2.for each of them放在最后面 them有指代歧义,因为前面有好几个复数名词可以指代。而且for放在后面怪怪的,they would need for each of them 明显不如 they would each need表达简洁。
我的分析 a 选项 句子主语在宾语从句中做主语,用主动语态比较好 个人觉得这个句子强调need的发出者 所以被动罗嗦。 b 选项of+being结构也wordy c 改变句意 typhoid fever and a visa and landing card 三者平行 d 和e的差别在于 1.they would each need 和 they would need 前者后面跟着的名词应该是单数,后者后面跟着的名词应该是复数 而 e中evidences没有用复数。2.for each of them放在最后面 them有指代歧义,因为前面有好几个复数名词可以指代。而且for放在后面怪怪的,they would need for each of them 明显不如 they would each need表达简洁。
我的分析 a 选项 句子主语在宾语从句中做主语,用主动语态比较好 个人觉得这个句子强调need的发出者 所以被动罗嗦。 b 选项of+being结构也wordy c 改变句意 typhoid fever and a visa and landing card 三者平行 d 和e的差别在于 1.they would each need 和 they would need 前者后面跟着的名词应该是单数,后者后面跟着的名词应该是复数 而 e中evidences没有用复数。2.for each of them放在最后面 them有指代歧义,因为前面有好几个复数名词可以指代。而且for放在后面怪怪的,they would need for each of them 明显不如 they would each need表达简洁。
我的分析 a 选项 句子主语在宾语从句中做主语,用主动语态比较好 个人觉得这个句子强调need的发出者 所以被动罗嗦。 b 选项of+being结构也wordy c 改变句意 typhoid fever and a visa and landing card 三者平行 d 和e的差别在于 1.they would each need 和 they would need 前者后面跟着的名词应该是单数,后者后面跟着的名词应该是复数 而 e中evidences没有用复数。2.for each of them放在最后面 them有指代歧义,因为前面有好几个复数名词可以指代。而且for放在后面怪怪的,they would need for each of them 明显不如 they would each need表达简洁。