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发表于 2013-3-2 00:02:39 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
11 年 12 月 02
Doyou agree or disagree with the following statement: People who cannot acceptthe criticism from others
willnot be successful at working in a group.

Haveyou ever been criticized by your superiors or your colleagues? Did you feelthat your self-confidence was destroyed by them? Did you have to pretendaccepting their criticism while you were cursing them secretly? Harsh as itseems at first sight, criticism could work towards a positive direction foremployees. In other word, the person not accepting criticism is impossible tosucceed in working in a group.

Firstof all, there is no doubt that adopting the advices of the rectification of themistakes that they have made can make incredible contributions to employees'success in work. Not only can they benefit from the constant encouragement- inspiringthemselves to be perfect in their daily work, but also their attitude can makeprogress. Once criticised due to making the same mistakes for several times,they must be more cautious in work than ever before; once got the criticismthat they often lost their temper as a response to pressure in work, they wouldtry to control their emotions as well as possible; once criticised for theiroral English was not fluent, they are sure to overcome all of the obstacleswhich stand in their way of improving it. Small though these changes are, theymust be the fundamentals bricks of theemployees' success in the future.

What'smore, people in the group must respect the workers who accept the criticismmodestly and continue working with others in harmony. And with the friendly atmosphere, the workers can approach the successeasily. On the one hand, the environment provides the workers with endless happinessand pleasure, making them work efficiently. On the other hand, they can getrespond immediately, when they turn to others for help. That's why my father whoused to be a modest clerk can set up his own company by his colleagues'support.

Aswe all know, criticism sometimes weakens the confidence of the targets indeed,leading them to lose the active attitude towards their following challengingtasks, so it’s a widely acknowledged statement that people don’t need to acceptthem. But when the workers criticized always deny, is it vital for them to be alittle self-effacing? No criticism means no improvement; no improvement meansno success. Contrary to the opinion that people don’t need to accept criticismis my heartful suggestion.

Noone is perfect, so being criticized by others is normal. What they need to doafter that is just to focus on the present or try to improve themselves. Ifthey hold the same opinion as me, I believe that they will be successful in oneday.


这是以前写的,如今写起来,真的是非常费劲儿,还有打字好慢,哎,所以督促自己写文章.
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2013-3-6 22:24:26 | 只看该作者

TPO 22 综合写作

The statement that ethanol fuel is not agood alternative of gasoline is suspected by the professor who gives the shortlecture, and he use three specific points tosupport his idea.

First, using ethanol will not add morecarbon dioxide. Although burning ethanol certainly releases carbon dioxide asfueling gasoline does, which contributes to global warming, growing plants suchas corns can counteract with it. As we all know,corns absorb carbon dioxide when growing. In other words, the use of ethanolwill remove warm gas of the atmosphere.

Second, planting corns for producingethanol will not reduce the source of food for animals. Although some peopleworry that there will be less available food for creatures, if an increasingpart of corns is used to make ethanol, people can product ethanol by thematerial from plants which are not eaten by animals. Because those materialsare rich in cellulose, which can make

What's more, ethanol can compete withgasoline in term of price. Even though the ethanol's producers have taxsubsidies, which make the price of gasoline and ethanol same, ethanol will haveadvantages in price if the amount of ethanol fuel increases. It is predictedthat the price of ethanol will drop by 40 percent, if its producers producethree times greater than its current amount.
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2013-3-10 23:05:51 | 只看该作者

2012-02-18NA 独立写作

2012-02-18
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Working at home using computers or telephones is better than working in the office.


Have you ever imagine that one day you can work at home instead of being in the office? Don't think that I am kidding. In fact, some people have already done as what I mentioned due to the new working way via computer and the Internet. However, some people do not support the style of working, and they insist that people should work in the office with their colleagues. Contrary to the opinion of those people is my heartfelt and considerate viewpoint that working at home has more advantages than in the office, and several points in different dimensions will be demonstrated and explained to testify my hypothesis.


First and foremost, no one can deny the fact that working at home really saves the employees' time which used to be spent on travelling between their offices and houses. In most cases, companies require their workers to arrive at offices at eight in the morning, and they regard it as an important factor to judge the amount of bonus given to employees. So, in order to earn the money, many people have to get up at about six o'clock. After a quick breakfast, they rush to the subway station or just drive by themselves. They have to bare the crowded subways, or busy traffic. What's more, sometimes they are late for work for the transportation problems. It not only makes them feel exhausted, but also bring criticism to them from their strict superiors.
But all of these unhappy experiences can be solved if workers can stay at home to deal with their work. And I am sure that everyone will have more energy to concentrate on their daily tasks.


Another obvious advantage brought by working at home can save money for both employers and employees. As we all know, the rent of offices are expensive because most of them are located in the business center of the city. So, if workers work at home, companies do not need to spend money on working places, let alone the cost of electricity and water. And in the term of workers, they can cook for themselves at home. For one thing, the food made at home is cheaper healtier and more safe than those sold at restaurants. For another, they have the right to decide their dishes.


Admittedly, working at home prevent workers dealing with problems face to face, which may slows down the process of solving problems. And, it cuts down the opportunities of enjoying social activities. But, as I mentioned in the first paragraph, people can work with others through the Internet. With the help of it, they can exchange opinions by online chatting and share information through emails or MSN as well. It is crystal clear that, from those processes, the work efficiency will not be disturbed, and the relationship between others will be tighter than before. In addition, working at home allow people to deal with their family affairs more conveniently.


In the end, I would like to emphasis that with the incredible development of science, working at home will become a trend in the world. When taking the situations of workers and employers into consideration, certainly, working at home has an advantage over working in the office. Well, if possible, why not have a try?
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2013-3-14 23:38:25 | 只看该作者

虽然没有人改,但是我还是把自己的作文贴上来,权当监督自己,明天开始争取每天一篇!!!!!


Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

The opinions of celebrities, such as certain entertainment and athletes, are more important for younger people that older people.
同意
1年轻人比老年人更好的融入社会,面临诸多机会、挑战、诱惑等等,他们更愿意以知名人士为榜样,从这些人的言行举止、想法中汲取能量,以帮助自己更好的发展。然而老年人多半把精力放在如何养生,因此名人们的观点对他们的影响小。


2、老年人的阅历比年轻人丰富,他们对事物有自己的观点和看法,不容易受到别人的影响,尤其是名人。但是年轻人阅历浅,对人生存在很多困惑,经常面临两难的选择,因此……


19:07_19:52


Have you ever been crazy about some famous singers? Have you ever been influenced by them, like pop singers or famous athletes? Have you ever accepted their opinions which indirect your daily life? As a young people, your answer might be yes. However, are older people affected by celebrities in the same way? In fact, celebrities cannot show an important influence on older people easily. But when it comes to youth, things will change.


To begin with, older people have more precious experience than the young, which help them set up their own opinions towards different affairs. From the unforgettably hard war time, they know to be thankful to the life. From the unadmirable things they have done, they keep in mind that what can do and what cannot. Take my grandfather for example. He experienced the hard ten years from 1966 to 1976, and during that time, he was accused of holding a wrong attitude to the Mao who started the campaign. Due to many complicated political reasons, he had to divorce his wife, my grandmother. And he had to say something against his heart, which got other people involved in the trouble like him. He felt guilty about his behaviors during that time, so he set up mind that never hurt others no matter what is going on. In contrast, some celebrities nowadays frequently say something aimed at abusing other, and their incorrect actions and opinions are copied by young people.


What's more, more and more young people feel confused when facing their current conditions, including opportunities and challenges, however the old people pay more attention to their health or daily diet. So it is obvious to draw the conclusion that young people are influenced more than old ones by celebrities' viewpoints. When they are in front of some chances to improve their abilities or broaden their horizon, they need learn constructive suggestions from celebrities as fine examples. When they are experiencing quiet difficult time, like college entrance examination, they usually turn to famous people for help, which means they can get positive energy from them and try their best to overcome these unavoidable difficulties. In the contrary, old people face different situations from the young. One of the most essential things they want to do is keeping healthy and staying from illnesses. So they are less influenced by celebrities.


From the discussion above, it is crystal clear that the opinions from well-known people show different influence on the young and the old. For one perspective, old people have already build their way of thinking towards the world, but young people are still young and lacking in personal experience. For another, what they are concerned is different respectively. While the young need celebrities' views to continue their life, the old just focus on being in good physical condition. So it is simply superficial to say that famous people's statements have the same effect on people nowadays.


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