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23 January
Independent Writingo you agree or disagree with the following statement:Students can get as many benefits from organization or club activities as they can get from their academic studies.


As we all know that, the activities of the organization and club are playing more and more important role in the modern university than ever before. When asked that if the benefit from the activities is equal to the academic studies, in my view, absolutely yes.I will illustrate my answer in three different perspectives.

No one can deny that the campus life is very precious for all students which will be recalled through all one’s life. The activities with the classmates and friends are certainly the most valuable part in the school-days. In other words, students can gain lots of happiness and friendships from the clubs and the organizations. Take myself as an example, I taken a part in the students union once came into the university, and participated in a lot activities, which are the largest harvests in my campus life equal to the benefit to from the study. Until now, I still recall the experience in the students union with my friends .

Furthermore, the skills , such as the communication, organizing and presentation, are the necessary for the competition in the work and daily life, which can’t be foud in  books. Given this situation, the activities are not only leisure way but also the approach to the better future. The organization and club in the universities contend various aspects of the skills that are needed by the students. On the other hand, according to activities students can get in touch with more people who with different background and major, which can give students both expansive view and different kinds of friends. All of these will become a wealth to young people in the future after graduation.

Finally, functions of the activities and the studies are different, and supplement each other against. Good studies can win a well respect in community, which make people more popular in activities. At the same time, the club and organization will provide stage to show yourself to others which can give you a better situation of your major studies, because of the connections and skills practiced in the activities .

For the reasons I talked above, we have reasons to believe that both activities and studies make it each other possible, and are indispensable in our lives.

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The reading passage is talking about the reasons of the decline of the yellow ceder, while the professor hold the opposite view, that the reasons of the decline have not be confirmed.The professor disprove the reading passage in three different perspectives.

First of all, according to the reading passage, the beetle is the killer of the tree, which is disagree with the lecture. The professor said, that the surface of yellow ceder have some chemical that can detect the insect, according to this capability, only the destroyed or the sick ones can be attacked by the insect. Since attack from the beetle can not explain the decline of the tree, This is where the speaker disagree with the writer.

An other hypothesis is the damage from the bear, in contradict, the professor indicate that there is no bear in the decline area-northwestern of America-where is so cold that the bear can not living. This is entirely opposed to the writer’s expectation.

Finally, the professor said that it is impossible for the climate to decrease the population of the tree, because the area of the decline happened is the high elevation,while the lower is safe. He also indicate that the temperature of the high elevation is warmer than the lower area, which give the strongest opposition to the reading passage.

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23 January 改
Independent Writingo you agree or disagree withthe following statement:Students can get as many benefits from organization orclub activities as they can get from their academic studies.


As we all know that, the activities of theorganization and club are playing a more and more important role in the modernuniversity than ever before. When asked that if the benefit getting fromthe activities is equally important to the academic studies, in my view,absolutely, yes. I willillustrate my answer (point) in three different perspectives.

（既然楼主中立态度建议可以让步。）Quite beneficial as academic study is, forinstance, which can be used as anchor when applying for future studies, No no one can deny that the campus after class life is very precious for all students which (that) willbe recalled through all one’s life. The activities with the classmates andfriends are certainly the most valuable part in the school-days(没杠). In other words, students can gain lots of happiness and friendships fromthe clubs and the organizations. Take myself as an example, I taken apart in（过去式 took part in）
thestudents union once came into the university, and participated in a lotactivities, which are the largest harvests in my campus life equal to the benefitknowledge to absorbing from the study. Until now, I still recallcherish theexperience in the students union with my friends.

Furthermore, the skills, such as the communication, organizing and presentation,are the necessary for the competition in the work and daily life, which can’tbe foud found in books but learned from those activities. Given this situation, the activities are notonly leisure way but also the approach to the better future. The organizationand club in the universities contend various aspects of the skills that areneeded by are necessary for the students. On the other hand, according to as participants of different sorts of activities, students can get in touch with more people who withhave different background and major, which can givestudents both expansive view and different kinds of friends. All of these willbecome a wealth to young people in the future after graduation.

最后一段感觉楼主是想转折。Finally, However, the comparison between the significance of academic studyand part-time activities is itself ridiculous. Functionsof the activities and the studies are different, and supplement each otheragainst they will promote each other simultaneously. Good studies can win awell respect in community, which make people more popular in activities. At the same time, the club and organizationwill provide stage to show yourself to others which can give you a bettersituation of your major studies, because of the connections and skillspracticed in the activities.

For the reasons I talked (demonstrate) above, we have reasons to believe that both activities andstudies make it each other possible, and are indispensable in our lives.

楼主这种中立态度比较少见，我的建议慎重接受。觉的总体不错，不要光说activities 忘说academicstudy呀。