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bbq521

Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Nowadays, there is a phenomenon that some famous athletes and entertainers get lots of money in one game or performance. At the end of year, they can earn millions of dollars easily. On the surface, it may seem a sound thing because they are famous people, but carefully weighing on the mind, I think that their works is not equal to their high salaries.

The main reason that I prefer that they should not deserve such high salaries is that the higher salaries, the higher price of tickets. How do these people get high salaries? I think the most direct way is improving the price of tickets. As a consequence, audiences would spend more money to see these famous persons' performance or competition. Undoubtedly, some people would lose their rights to watch play-by-play sports or performances, in that they cannot afford the higher price of tickets. So the development of sports and entertainments would be limited as the number of audiences less and less.

Another reason that famous athletes and entertainers should not earn millions of dollars is that most of them seldom contribute their money to the development of society. From newspaper, Internet, television, and other media channels, we often find that these stars spent money on slap-up restaurants, high-price consumables, sports cars and other luxurious goods. Sometimes they may drink so many alcohols, hit the pipe, find sexy girl to make love. For example, a Chinese famous entertainer called Hong Dou, who outrages children when he became a star. Fortunately, he had been sentenced imprisonment for five years' imprisonment. In my opinion, majority stars don't value their life, and are the cancer of the contemporary society.

In the conclusion, I think that famous athletes and entertainers should not earn millions of dollars every year and deserve such high salaries. The higher salaries, the higher price of tickets, which make it difficult to watch play-by-play sports or performances. Moreover, most of stars seldom contribute their money to the development of society, only in their enjoyments.

guandream

以下是引用bbq521在2004-11-18 11:38:00的发言：

Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Nowadays, there is a phenomenon that some famous athletes and entertainers earn get lots of money in one game or performance. At the end of year, they can earn millions of dollars easily. On the surface, it may seem logical a sound thing because they are famous people, but carefully weighing on the mind, I think that their works is not equal to their high salaries.(idea is clear)

The main reason that I prefer that they should not deserve such high salaries is that the higher salaries, the higher price of tickets. this is my main reason to rebuffle the phenonen. How do these people get high salaries? I think the most direct way is improving the price of tickets. As a consequence, audiences would spend more money to see these famous persons' performance or competition. Undoubtedly, some people would lose their rights to watch play-by-play sports or performances, in that they cannot afford the higher price of tickets. So the development of sports and entertainments would be limited as the number of audiences less and less. good point

Another reason that famous athletes and entertainers should not earn millions of dollars is that most of them seldom contribute their money to the development of society. From newspaper, Internet, television, and other media channels, we often find that these stars spent money on slap-up restaurants, high-price consumables, sports cars and other luxurious goods. Sometimes they may drink so many alcohols, hit the pipe, find sexy girl to make love. For example, a Chinese famous entertainer called Hong Dou, who outrages children when he became a star. Fortunately, he had been sentenced imprisonment for five years' imprisonment. In my opinion, majority stars don't value their life, and are the cancer of the contemporary society. (this point does not respond to the topic. the topic is talking about whether they deserve, but this paragraph only critisizes their spending)

In the conclusion, I think that famous athletes and entertainers should not earn millions of dollars every year and deserve such high salaries. The higher salaries, the higher price of tickets, which make it difficult to watch play-by-play sports or performances. Moreover, most of stars seldom contribute their money to the development of society, only in their enjoyments.(good conclusion)

try to support your theme in other aspects that respond to the requirement of the topic

bbq521

谢谢，20好考试，心中始终没底呀！

guandream

do not worry. it is just a exam. the result will normally be better than you expected.

before exam, read most of the official topics and get some ideas. then review your essays.

good luck to your exam.