Emory的leadership style 改如何写呢？

fayesophia

Here we go:

The question I asked:
"2. For essay 3:

"Describe your leadership style and give an example of how you will use that style to make an impact on Goizueta Business School as a student or alumnus. "
I want to confirm with you to ensure I don't misunderstand the question.
In my essay, I should give out my leadership style concisely and no need to provide my previous example. I should focus on my planning or expectation on what I will contribute to GBS and my alumnus by my leadership style and at meantime, provide the specific plan as example. Am I right on the explaining? "

The answer:
"On the leadership question, you are on the right track.  lease use a clarifying statement that describes your style and then go on to describe how you would take a leadership role as a student or an alumna and what you would do.  You may provide an example."

Hope this will help~

fayesophia

唉，就是这感觉啊！！
正是因为我的short term，然后我发现目前我缺少什么，然后才有为什么现在要这个MBA，然后再接着具体些short term~

现在拆开写呢，我就觉得相同的话我是第一小题里说一遍，第二小题里又说一遍。。。不同的词而已。。。

关键是，不说呢，第一小题我上来就直入主题解释为什么现在，感觉特别的“二愣子”！可是只要一解释，那必然和第二小题有重复。。。

我都想撞墙了！

fayesophia

哈哈

300字用完了

还没轮到说contribute的事儿呢~~

哈哈哈~~~

softjimmy

第一个essay的3个小问题顺序可以改变吗？有人问过AO吗？

lindalibinbin

第一个essay的3个小问题顺序可以改变吗？有人问过AO吗？

-- by 会员 softjimmy (2012/11/23 23:09:55)

我没问但是我换了顺序，反正是point form，不是ABC。

starshane

同不知道300字要如何布局。我发现我花了200字describe，100字给example……

这题重点应该在于如何contribute……

-- by 会员 starshane (2012/11/23 5:42:39)

100字只写了一个example么？一般contribution 都会多写几个的，只写一个反而发现很难~

-- by 会员 transiencesisi (2012/11/23 16:23:33)

我晕，题目让你只写一个啊。


·        Describe your leadership styleand give an example of how you will use that style to make an impact onGoizueta Business School as a student or alumnus. Please limit your responseto 300 words.

starshane

关键是，Emory不都已经EA过了么，有那么多人已经成功击败了他家的essay拿到了面试……求真人现身说法啊~

carbonzju

放轻松，别太stretch了

starshane

放轻松，别太stretch了

-- by 会员 carbonzju (2012/11/24 2:43:30)

哈哈，ls你这句话和你的moto”悟透人生每一步才是最重要的“连起来真是相应成趣啊

transiencesisi

Here we go:

The question I asked:
"2. For essay 3:

"Describe your leadership style and give an example of how you will use that style to make an impact on Goizueta Business School as a student or alumnus. "
I want to confirm with you to ensure I don't misunderstand the question.
In my essay, I should give out my leadership style concisely and no need to provide my previous example. I should focus on my planning or expectation on what I will contribute to GBS and my alumnus by my leadership style and at meantime, provide the specific plan as example. Am I right on the explaining? "

The answer:
"On the leadership question, you are on the right track.  lease use a clarifying statement that describes your style and then go on to describe how you would take a leadership role as a student or an alumna and what you would do.  You may provide an example."

Hope this will help~

-- by 会员 fayesophia (2012/11/23 22:21:23)

呵呵，谢谢fayesophia！方向明了，就硬着头皮写吧，唉