pennywu20 发表于 2013-5-13 21:09
不好意思写错了,再发一篇综合
5月12号作业TPO19
The student, who is a part-time phone service buzzer, ...
The student, who is a part-time phoneservice buzzer, actually contradicts the statements made in the readingpassage. He is of the view that consumers can get the truth in buzzing andstate three specific points.
First, according to the lecture (lecturer?好像都可以?), it is not true that buzzing willgive consumers incorrect information. Companies hire person who has used theirproducts and think their products is favorable. Thus, buzzing is not likeoriginal advertisements that recruit people to lie. Although the buzzers getpaid from the company, they talk about what theirauthentic feeling about products. So buzzing will not give consumers incorrect information about the buzzed product.
Furthermore, contrary to the belief in the passage that consumers become lesscritical when listen (listening) to the buzzers,the student asserts that consumers remain clear and skeptical when buzzed. Tobe specific, they questioned(虽然后面有before还是不要转换时态了吧) the details,such as price, service and the buzzer’s familiarity before they make the finalresponses. If the buzzers fail to give consumers satisfying answers, consumers will not choose to purchase products.
Finally, the professor also points out that it isstupid to believe buzzing will not destroy the trust(双重否定为肯定,是不是反了?) among people. He saysthat companies cannot recruit buzzers if their products are bad. Informationthe consumers hear from buzzers is not only sincere, it is likely talking abouta good product(木有听出来QAQ). If consumers gain a nice experience after they use products, theywill become more trustful and open to people. This makes the final point in thepassage indefensible.
In conclusion, thecontents in the passage are totally jeopardized by the student, who uses threecontradictory points to weaken the argument.(完全木有要conclusion的概念啊肿么破)
1. 膜拜
2. 受益匪浅
3. 再膜拜
4. 谢谢指导
5. 再次为迟到道歉!!!
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