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TOPIC: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Nowadays, there is a question on whether sports and social activities have great significance as just like the classes and libraries. Opponents of the standpoint that sports and social activities have equal importance with classes are those people who hold an idea that these activities take quite a long time and make us too tired to study patiently. On the contrary, there are also some people, including me, who hold the opinion that these activities should receive equal financial support and attention, for the reason that it brings us more enjoyable life and make us healthier and stronger in our mind.

First of all, for the student who wants to study efficiently must have a stronger body, is undeniable. No one can deny that essential sports and social activities are necessary for us if we want to achieve this goal. From the most up dated survey conducted by Chinese biggest website sina.com, there are 80% students who have excellent achievements in college not only they study very hard, they also join various activities and do some sports such as play basketball and tennis ball. Hence, sports and social activities can increase their overall wellness.

In addition, another advantage can’t be ignored is that sports and activities make our life more enjoyable. After all, the most important thing for us is happy, enjoy our life. For example, as modern society develops, people have to deal with more and more pressure brought by heavy work load, a lot of people choose suicide because they cannot bear these pains in their daily life, No matter adults or students, if they haven’t more healthy mentality and positive attitude toward their life, even though they could get A level in every subject, then so what?

Yet, as coin has two sides, while we are enjoying the superior aspect the sports and activities brought, it may also bring some negative effects. There is no controversy that doing sports and joining all kinds of activities take a long time, especially in the vital period of our life. And also, because one will cost a lot of money, it may cause financial issues.

In conclusion, despite there are a couple of disadvantages of joining activities and doing sports, the advantages of it easily surpass the minor shortcomings when we take the view to scan the whole picture. Thus, I support that sports and activities are as important as classes and libraries and we should receive equal financial supports.