第一二三只的作文帖~~求指导！！！

第一二三只

实在很抱歉，贴得怎么晚！耽误你修改了，我真的很抱歉啊！！！！下次不会了！！我会及时看通知的！

-- by 会员 第一二三只 (2013/3/14 13:38:42)

没事儿，我今天晚上给你改好，但是可能会稍微晚点，我自己还有13号的作文没写，还要给其它同学改，我尽量晚上11点之前改完~

-- by 会员 yzwdan818 (2013/3/14 14:13:08)

没关系没关系！！你慢慢改！我不着急~~

yzwdan818

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most people often let others make decisions for them rather than
make decisions by themselves.

Do you choose your clothes by yourself or your parents? Do you make friends by yourself or others? Do you make business affairs by yourself or other people?（开头很好） I believe most people make above decisions by themselves not others. Although an advantage of letting others make decisions for them is saving time and energy, making their own decisions is far happier and more compatible. The merits of deciding by themselves out weight others do.

To begin with, decisions made by themselves(没有指代或者说指代不明) reflect their true needs, because no one knows others well except themselves. Put a very simple instance, when we go to shopping with friends, it is obvious that we have to choose ideal clothes. But the problem is that which one we choose: the one we like or the (one) friends prefer. On most circumstances, we choose the one we like instead of another(应该要加个名词，不能单独用吧). The main reason is that we know which dress on us look thinner, which coat makes us feel taller and which pants are more comfortable. Others' opinions, perhaps, could give us useful information, but the final one is made by our own. From trivial things to vital matters, the best decision is made by us.

In addition, the reason why so many people making decisions by themselves are that does good to cultivate independence and career succeeds. The procedure of deciding requires independent thinking and integration capabilities of information. A significant decision needs our utmost to probe the truth no matter how nonsignifant which（it） can influence the way of the whole thing. For example, a CEO or just a manager in a company has to deal with plenty of complicated affairs and makes a lot of decisions every day. If they rely on colleagues or their boss to decide all business affairs, I am afraid, they would ever and never(never and ever) feel the sense of promotion.


There is no denying that letting others replace us to decide will reduce our pressure and responsibilities. However, doing by ourselves not only can find the most suitable things but also can build our virtues, which is also most people’s choice. So……来个总结，自己决定比别人决定好，这样会显得更完整些。
基本功还不错，句式可以再多样一点，加强写长难句的能力（这一点我也很弱。。。。。。）