准备3战，我一定要上700分！

gobelieve

[倒计时33天]
今明两天都是满课。晚上教学楼还封楼了。
今天继续在整理逻辑bible，相信不久就要问世了！
这次要全部整理完再发上来。

gobelieve

[倒计时31天]
昨天晚上回家学的时间不长，看了逻辑Bible两章。单词1list。
今天白天是做了OG13的SC，11/15。在家上网不是很方便，可能更新不够及时。
Bible今天就可以看完了！开心呀。
最后祝CDer中秋十一双节愉快。

gobelieve

[倒计时30天]
只剩下整整一个月的时间了。OG的SC第二遍才过了一半。假期虽然不可避免地要走亲访友，但是该利用的时间一定要把握好。
第二遍OG-SC Review记录
进度:1-30题;正确率:83.3%；错题:#3,#13,#19,#28,#29(已整理分析)

进度:31-45题;正确率:73.3%；错题:#35,#38,#40,#42
进度:46-70题;正确率:76%；错题:#50,#51,#56,#59,#60,#66

gobelieve

整理错题搜索帖子订正思路真是大工程啊！
还好基本上所有错题都能在论坛里面搜到。
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35. By 1940, the pilot Jacqueline Cochran held seventeen official national and international speed records,and she earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to beof dangerously experimental design.

(A) and she earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be

(E) earned at a time when aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were

错选A，正选E。

思维误区：个人认为them指代speed records，E中不能省略them。

实际上earned是修饰前面的speed records。

OG解释：

Rhetorical construction; Diction

Since this is a complex sentence with a lot of elements, its rhetorical construction is crucial in order to maintain effective communication. The underlined part emphasizes that on top of earning seventeen speed records, the pilot Jacqueline Cochran did so at a time when planes were of dangerous experimental design because aviation was still so new.

A This version is too wordy and does not contribute to clarity. Economical, clear expression connectsearneddirectly with the nounspeed records, which it modifies.

E Correct.The wordearnedis close to the noun it modifies,speed records.This version uses the clearest expression of causal relationship:so new that many X were Y.

论坛搜索到的大牛解释：

1 过去分词用逗号隔开，还是可以作为非限定性修饰语来修饰其之前的名词的！
EG.  Excavators found an artifact buried under the tomb.  

=Excavators found an artifact, buried under the tomb.
一般V-ing分词作状语修饰主语或者主语的动作，乃至整个前句的情况比较多，所以要想修饰就近的名词，最好还是用which或者限定性的修饰比较靠谱。
其次earn records获得奖章，所以earned需要被动，就像例句中的buried一样。（By shirryzhan）

http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-747305-1-1.html

2 关于ved……这里没有什么限定不限定的……在通常来说就是ved指代最近的名词；
存在某些例外，X ofY ved，这时的ved修饰X of Y整体，不修饰Y；大多数情况都是就近修饰Y。
用你的common sense来决定修饰整体还是部分，如果两个都make sense（1.优先指代Y 2. bad modifier，有多种interpretations）（By DUKB24）
http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-760686-1-1.html

gobelieve

38. Bengal-born writer, philosopher, and educator Rabindranath Tagore had the greatest admirationfor Mohandas K. Gandhi the person and also as a politician, but Tagore had beenskeptical of Gandhi’s form of nationalism and his conservative opinions about India’s cultural traditions.

(A) for Mohandas K. Gandhi the person and also as a politician, but Tagore had been

(B) for Mohandas K. Gandhi as a person and as a politician, but Tagore was also

错选A，正选B。

思维误区：我认为B中the person和a politician一个是表示属性一个是职业不能并列。实际上A项的错误就是两个元素应该平行而没有平行。正确的说法应为Gandhi the person and the politician, 或者Gandhi as a person and as a politician

OG解释：

Rhetorical construction; Parallelism

This sentence describes the writer and philosopher Tagore’s two types of feelings for Gandhi. The underlined part of the sentence has to express correctly the time line of these two feelings (they happened simultaneously). The underlined part also has to express the correct relationship between the complements of admiration and skepticism.

A To maintain parallelism, it is important for two conjoined phrases to be of the same grammatical type.Thus, it is appropriate to conjoin Gandhi the person and the politician, or Gandhi as a person and as a politician,but it is nonstandard in English to mix and match. In addition, the use of the past perfect tense had been places the skepticism earlier on the time line than the admiration, which is misleading.

B Correct. This version correctly conjoins two parallel phrases, Gandhi as a person and as a politician, and, in using two simple past tenses to introduce the two emotions, marks them as holding at the same time.

论坛搜索的大牛解释：

*发现了一个我自己没有注意到的点，关于时态的，因为篇幅较长，就只贴地址了，以后自己做题的时候希望也能多注意。BTW，每次搜语法帖子都是这么几个大牛回答，真厉害！http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-761206-1-1.html

gobelieve

[倒计时29天]
新东方系列--数学615题

gobelieve

[倒计时26天]
这几天很没有斗志，有点睡不醒的感觉，很不好。
要是能买到鸡血就好了。
这几天一共完成了曼哈顿综合推理部分，阅读9篇，逻辑30题，语法40题。

gobelieve

[倒计时21天]
好几日没有来更新了。
今天换库了，好好看机经。
明天继续OG。

2012Michelle

看了Gobelieve的学习笔记，我真心汗啊。。。不仅每天的内容很充实，而且求索的精神真是棒棒的。

坚持、加油！

gobelieve

看了Gobelieve的学习笔记，我真心汗啊。。。不仅每天的内容很充实，而且求索的精神真是棒棒的。

坚持、加油！

-- by 会员 2012Michelle (2012/10/11 8:46:34)

谢谢你！等你整理语法的时候有不明白的地方都可以在论坛上搜，大牛们的解释都超级棒！你也加油！