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haduni

Nowadays, some people believe that colleges or universities should focus on the academic field and should not draw attention to work preparation. However, given that people are suffering a mounting pressure because of the substantial competition of all kinds of work, ranging from interpersonal relationship to work business, it is reasonable for universities to care about their students' future and offer more courses to prepare them for their future working.

Today, both teachers and students lay too much emphasis on the scores, thus seldom care about other abilities which is also essential for students' future success. For students who do well in academic subject, getting good grades does not necessarily mean having a better understanding of how to deal with the relationship among people. Last year, a shocking news comes out, a Tsing Hua university graduate sells the pork meat alone in the farm market to make a living, the top-A students cannot hold a job for more than two month because "He does not possess social abilities" form one of his ex-boss. To give a better hand for their students in the future job market, arranging the relationship is just the course many colleges should have offered much earlier.

Moreover, for most of the time, the knowledge we learn in the colleges or universities are too far away from technology applied in the real industries. The aim of the universities is to make you comprehend your major field systematically form a whole-scale prospect, which the industries require you can change your knowledge into the real products which can earn benefits. Colleges and universities should help their students accomplish this transformation form the thought of a scholar to the view of a engineer, as a result, they should provide more opportunity for their students to get access to the industrial facilities. Only can those students get ready in the preparation work, they have a better chance to find their niche in future competition.

Besides, we should not be blind that the courses related to work preparation may be time-consuming and demand lots of money form the precious educational resources, colleges and universities which offer those courses may undertake the risk of lowering their academic qualities. However, I believe that it is worth for them to offer and for students to take those course, because we should not also forget the aim of universities is to help the students get full developed, that is, they should not only focus on the academic areas.

In conclusion, I think that the interests of students should always come first for all universities, they should ensure their students can find a decent job after graduation, which is the most basic requirement obviously.

beiyezi

Nowadays, some people believe that colleges or universities should focus on the academic field and should not draw attention to work preparation. However, given that people are suffering a mounting pressure because of the substantial competition of all kinds of work, ranging from interpersonal relationship to work business, it is reasonable for universities to care about their students' future and offer more courses to prepare them for their future working.

Today, both teachers and students lay too much emphasis on the scores, thus seldom care about other abilities which is also essential for students' future success. For students who do well in academic subject, getting good grades does not necessarily mean having a better understanding of how to deal with the relationship among people. Last year, a shocking news comes out, a Tsing Hua university graduate sells the pork meat alone in the farm market to make a living, the top-A students cannot hold a job for more than two month because "He does not possess social abilities" form one of his ex-boss. To give a better hand for their students in the future job market, arranging the relationship is just the course many colleges should have offered much earlier. (没说清楚提供更多课程和社交能力的关系)

Moreover, for most of the time, the knowledge we learn in the colleges or universities are too far away from technology applied in the real industries. The aim of the universities is to make you comprehend your major field systematically form a whole-scale prospect, which the industries require you can change your knowledge into the real products which can earn benefits. Colleges and universities should help their students accomplish this transformation form the thought of a scholar to the view of a engineer, as a result, they should provide more opportunity for their students to get access to the industrial facilities. Only can those students get ready in the preparation work, they have a better chance to find their niche in future competition.(个人认为 没和提供更多课程联系上, 只是小提了一下provide more opportunity for their students 不是很直接 )

Besides, we should not be blind that the courses related to work preparation may be time-consuming and demand lots of money form the precious educational resources, colleges and universities which offer those courses may undertake the risk of lowering their academic qualities(不明白为什么提供课程会降低学术质量). However, I believe that it is worth for them to offer and for students to take those course(courses), because we should not also forget the aim of universities is to help the students get full developed, that is, they should not only focus on the academic areas.

In conclusion, I think that the interests of students should always come first for all universities, they should ensure their students can find a decent job after graduation, which is the most basic requirement obviously.
语言方面: 很好很好啊
逻辑方面: 感觉作者更像在回答:学校应该提供给学生什么类型的课程专业课还是实践课,而不是在辩论应该多提供课程这论点, 每段论点都很好,多扯几句应该提供课程,再提这些课程是 社交课啊, 实践课啊,之类的就联系上了.
能力有限,只能改到这个程度, 黄色的是good,蓝色的是疑问或错误,改错了一定要跟我说哈

haduni

09-15 独立Nowadays, in terms of duty of professors, many people assert that the professors should dedicate more time with education of students. However, considering that the fierce competition in academic sphere and the fast pace of the scientific process, I believe that university professors should pay more attention on the research work.

First, a professor has to do lots of research to keep advanced in and lead the trend of one particular academic field. A scholar must pay great efforts to keep the academic leadership in the science world, as a result, he must have a better understanding of this field and can help students broaden their outlook to find the orientation in the confusion. What's more, those professors who steadily focus on their researches regardless of all kinds of temptations are always regarded as the role models for the youth because of their spirits of hard-working and persistence. Thus, professor should spend more time doing research to put science forward and set a model for young learners.

Moreover, what they need most is the guidance instead of step-by-step education. University students are all adults, they have the freedom to decide what to learn, in this sense, professor should not just spend more time educating them and forcing them to learn. By this, what I mean is that, professors should not spend too much time on the specific knowledge which students get easily get access to, what professors should do is that they need show students the right way to march on. Just like the captain on a ship, he should pay more attention on the ship heading to the destination instead of teaching every member how to operate the ship. However, guidence does not take the professor too much time, thus professor can get more time to do the research instead of educating those students.

Admittedly, we should not be blind to the importance of students' education, a better education can no doubt ensure students a bright future. But the effect of education most depends on the motivation of students. Thus, professors do not need to pay more time to impose the knowledge form the text book into students, they should focus on the research and show their students the right direction to move.

In the end, we can draw the conclusion that to be better for both  professor himself and students, the research should be laid more emphasis.

SophieS123

改好了，在附件里